curse of friday in vestibules of juggernauts
witch palpitations
surveying anatomical
differences
between genders apparent
signifying the indelible
ink running like hose
water spurting voraciously
across spooned tongues
lapping furiously
while the bed
smothers another
nightmare galloping
upon four stiletto
heels bent for pain
Curse of Friday in Vestibules of Juggernauts
I don't think I have the time to go into this right now, but I'll try to break it up at least in terms of the propositions:
I'll try to get more 'serious' later.
or Friday's curses in juggernauts' vestibulescurse of friday in vestibules of juggernauts
or How do you turn a wiccan on?witch palpitations --
Inversion? Why? Sex is apparent, gender is a linguistic product and therefore social.surveying anatomical
differences
between genders apparent --
Hey, this one's going to be fun!signifying the indelible
ink running like hose
water spurting voraciously --
And the fun continues, but I think I'll stay away from the pornographic/humiliation spectacle here.across spooned tongues
lapping furiously --
Well, I might at least mention it, but I still think it'll be more fun to take off in a new direction here.while the bed
smothers another
nightmare galloping
upon four stiletto
heels bent for pain
I'll try to get more 'serious' later.
Hello, Yejun! I'd like to thank you for the time spent in your analysis and interpretations of these poems of mine. I'm rather amazed, to tell you the truth... I spent far less time writing them than your words certainly must have taken to put together!
Each of these pieces that I've posted on this board are what I shall call "stream of consciousness" as they flowed right outta my head. no forethought or after thought. The reader gets what is (including myself).
When Doreen started this particular board, I thought that these would be a good place to post them... these free-flow pieces. Perhaps someone would translate them. Someone did early on up until now. Great work, Yejun, and greatly appreciated, altho I shan't comment on your own comments as there is too much for me to respond to at this time.
Thx again and I shall continue reviewing what you have so graciously written and attempt to put the words together.
Each of these pieces that I've posted on this board are what I shall call "stream of consciousness" as they flowed right outta my head. no forethought or after thought. The reader gets what is (including myself).
When Doreen started this particular board, I thought that these would be a good place to post them... these free-flow pieces. Perhaps someone would translate them. Someone did early on up until now. Great work, Yejun, and greatly appreciated, altho I shan't comment on your own comments as there is too much for me to respond to at this time.
Thx again and I shall continue reviewing what you have so graciously written and attempt to put the words together.
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My bad.
This forum really was originally created for "interpretation" meaning asking the reader to tell the poet/author what the piece meant to them.
Later, someone was asking for a critique forum and I thought the ideas fit well together. It was Totenkopf who asked but when I changed it to include critique the forum never got used anyway.
Recently I was on another site where yejun hangs out and we were talking about critique and I mentioned this forum here that doesn't get much use so he came over here and added some critiques.
Maybe we should indicate whether we want an interpretation or a critique from now on.
I donno.
I've been so busy critiquing myself, I can't figure anything out right now.
This forum really was originally created for "interpretation" meaning asking the reader to tell the poet/author what the piece meant to them.
Later, someone was asking for a critique forum and I thought the ideas fit well together. It was Totenkopf who asked but when I changed it to include critique the forum never got used anyway.
Recently I was on another site where yejun hangs out and we were talking about critique and I mentioned this forum here that doesn't get much use so he came over here and added some critiques.
Maybe we should indicate whether we want an interpretation or a critique from now on.
I donno.
I've been so busy critiquing myself, I can't figure anything out right now.
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