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Lucy!
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UnDeath

Post by Lucy! » November 25th, 2005, 1:38 pm

This

This existence
the UnDeath of us all
is not tangible or real
Nor is the era
of Death or AfterDeath

A brief present
An everlasting past
An astral, eternal future

PreDeath drips into UnDeath
Undeath plummets into Death
AfterDeath ravishes all

Nothingness emerges

Predeath succeeds again

LT
11-25-05

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Post by iblieve » November 30th, 2005, 6:54 pm

Great thoughts untangling the question we all ask. "C'
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Post by WIREMAN » November 30th, 2005, 11:01 pm

lay some more of them words on us Lucy...........

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Post by tinkerjack » December 8th, 2005, 2:25 pm

saludos

unlove is the begining of predeath?
just thinking out loud




edited 12/12/05
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