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~K
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limbotic

Post by ~K » September 18th, 2005, 10:32 am

I have only
been waiting
for you,
to say,

Go.

I've been
waiting so long
you'd think
I would
have left
by now

on my own

but,
no.

Coming or going

The difference
is all
in the flesh
&
No,
is such
a simple word
to choke
out,
but it staggers
& fails
with your breath,
& flashes
of insight
between the
gasps of realization,

that this is it

&

This Is It,
suggest,

a simple plan
will always fail

& what
you are
is reduced
to this.

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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » September 18th, 2005, 9:16 pm

very beautiful
your words haunt me
my dick is grovin up when i reading it
but usualy I find out that I did not get them at all

No go for me
already gone.

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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » September 19th, 2005, 3:15 am

So simple.
Just say the word.

simple,
but not a plan,

since a simple plan
will always fail..

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Post by stilltrucking » September 19th, 2005, 3:37 am

There is Quaker children's song i always loved. I can't remember all of it but one line that sticks in my mind is:

"It is a gift to be simple"

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Post by stilltrucking » September 19th, 2005, 4:18 am

my dick is grovin up when i reading it
I don't know what is going here. I did not write that.

But there it is
very strange

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Post by stilltrucking » September 19th, 2005, 8:24 pm

I am sorry ~K
I did not write that
Believe it or not it was the last thing on my mind
I find your poetry deeply moving
Even if I don't get it
Doreen tells me I should edit it
But what is the use
Who ever did it could just do it again
I can not tell you how creepy I feel
Like something lurking in this computer.

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Axanderdeath
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Post by Axanderdeath » September 20th, 2005, 1:30 am

poetry
is
is
so moch work
thus spoke G.A.P.

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