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by david
May 1st, 2015, 2:41 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: rubix cubit - domino shadow
Replies: 8
Views: 1204

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

smelling life
thru birth canal
This brought a hell of an image coupled with a UGH.
The rest was good fun too.
by david
March 30th, 2015, 3:51 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: the use of nature to fend off demons
Replies: 4
Views: 774

Re: the use of nature to fend off demons

Thanx all.
by david
March 26th, 2015, 4:57 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: the use of nature to fend off demons
Replies: 4
Views: 774

the use of nature to fend off demons

i want to cut you up for cutting me up at the traffic lights but anger management kicks in smiles all round lesson 35 the next time you see a bee land get down on one knee and threaten to touch him he will raise a foreleg to fend you off slowly carefully shake it like you shake the paw of a dog less...
by david
March 19th, 2015, 5:39 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Zorro
Replies: 2
Views: 451

Re: Zorro

I like Zorro, I like your poem, some titles do do it for me.
by david
March 19th, 2015, 3:53 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: flyboy
Replies: 5
Views: 673

Re: flyboy

Thanks all. David
by david
March 19th, 2015, 3:51 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: middle of June sunning
Replies: 5
Views: 571

Re: middle of June sunning

Really like this SP, your best one yet (for me).

I like the human interjection into the piece, just the right amount I thought.

I thought a play around with line breaks may enhance slightly.
by david
March 16th, 2015, 12:49 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: flyboy
Replies: 5
Views: 673

flyboy

he comes back from afghanistan paralysed from the neck down she has him ensconced in the attic so he can see the sky through the skylight window and fetches a new man home most nights to fuck her in the bedroom below voicebox gone he blinks once for no twice for yes she learns his fears learns rathe...
by david
December 4th, 2014, 7:24 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: a diamond before it is cut
Replies: 2
Views: 372

a diamond before it is cut

your going to fill me up
you say
with sperm
the way a confectioner
fills a donut
with cream

have me curl up
tightly
for insertion

from my window
autumn birch trees
run like a tiger
in the wind
by david
May 26th, 2014, 1:59 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Snapping Back To Mindfulness
Replies: 6
Views: 415

Re: Snapping Back To Mindfulness

Sweetwater
Lostwire..........thank you for the time you gave me....David
by david
May 22nd, 2014, 12:38 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: things fall apart before they come together
Replies: 6
Views: 301

Re: things fall apart before they come together

loved it, fine diversity, and some imagery that tripped the mind...D
by david
May 22nd, 2014, 12:22 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: YOU YISKA.
Replies: 8
Views: 393

Re: YOU YISKA.

I really liked the way you wrote this Tell, loved the content....D
by david
May 22nd, 2014, 12:15 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: status of recovery
Replies: 2
Views: 133

Re: status of recovery

Makes me think, and I like that, I have been Practising "mindfulness" so your poem comes across....D
by david
May 22nd, 2014, 12:08 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Snapping Back To Mindfulness
Replies: 6
Views: 415

Re: Snapping Back To Mindfulness

Judih
The Mingo........Thanks you 2 for the read and posts....D
by david
May 20th, 2014, 3:38 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Many Musics, Third Series
Replies: 9
Views: 878

Re: Many Musics, Third Series *Work in Progress*

I really enjoyed my first read through your poem; an epic that I will keep revisting, and which I know will reveal more treasure each time....D
by david
May 20th, 2014, 4:51 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Snapping Back To Mindfulness
Replies: 6
Views: 415

Snapping Back To Mindfulness

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