Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

smelling life
thru birth canal

This brought a hell of an image coupled with a UGH.
The rest was good fun too.

Thanx all.

i want to cut you up for cutting me up at the traffic lights but anger management kicks in smiles all round lesson 35 the next time you see a bee land get down on one knee and threaten to touch him he will raise a foreleg to fend you off slowly carefully shake it like you shake the paw of a dog less...

I like Zorro, I like your poem, some titles do do it for me.

Thanks all. David

Really like this SP, your best one yet (for me).

I like the human interjection into the piece, just the right amount I thought.

I thought a play around with line breaks may enhance slightly.

he comes back from afghanistan paralysed from the neck down she has him ensconced in the attic so he can see the sky through the skylight window and fetches a new man home most nights to fuck her in the bedroom below voicebox gone he blinks once for no twice for yes she learns his fears learns rathe...

your going to fill me up
you say
with sperm
the way a confectioner
fills a donut
with cream

have me curl up
tightly
for insertion

from my window
autumn birch trees
run like a tiger
in the wind

Sweetwater
Lostwire..........thank you for the time you gave me....David

loved it, fine diversity, and some imagery that tripped the mind...D

I really liked the way you wrote this Tell, loved the content....D

Makes me think, and I like that, I have been Practising "mindfulness" so your poem comes across....D

Judih
The Mingo........Thanks you 2 for the read and posts....D

I really enjoyed my first read through your poem; an epic that I will keep revisting, and which I know will reveal more treasure each time....D

Egg tooth crack in a sky blue shell pearlescent pearl one knit one Grandmother sunday afternoon western Gregory Peck bucking bronco colt .45 Mach 4/5? jets refuel in mid-air dragonflies couple uncouple