Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

very interesting indeed

its not the sleep
i fear the most
its the wake
from what i've dreamt

yeah, I can relate to that, for sure

Dissolution Let the days fall softly into nights, which will then rise silently through dawns where cycles come to end inhaled by sleepy yawns. Do not watch me dissipate stop trying to hold on just a habit need be broke ashes blown, the fire's gone you cannot feel or embrace smoke. There is a greate...

good thoughts in here

loved the ending especially

sounds like quite an awesome guy

thanks for sharing these Doreen

LR, thanks for the read. Yes, it's a story indeed; trying to capture the element of a woman stuck in an abusive relationship. Maybe she relates this back to her childhood...and her only defense is to tune out. Doreen, thank you for the warm welcome. I have missed reading you also. I'm really glad to...

Intrusion When he is inside me he is nothing seeing everything wanting anything needing something he wanders the halls of the universe shoes clicking bare floor echoing- he calls out my name in to emptiness we have no windows here. As I quickly grab the hand of the little girl who walks in my bare f...

how true it is

oustanding piece

I love the visual...and the ending lines...very cool

pretty cool piece

"a deep sadness would arrive
with suitcases full of sacreds

filled with guilt ,disappiontment and abuse

demmanding my attention"

Loved these lines and the last verse too...awesome write

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great concept

enjoyed this piece...I love the ones that make me think