Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

i'd rather read:

"rinsing years
from folded hands
and damp prayers"


but i'm just splitting hairs, this is a good one! keep em coming 68

initially i read the last line as "shall we pray"

what do you mean by shall we "spray"?

this is great, keep writing hard!

i liked Vertigo in the plain whorl of your finger...he's got a very distinct voice and writing style..nice!

Here's my jam right now: Destroyer - Blue Eyes

TRY NOT TO THINK OF BED BUGS!
TRY NOT TO THINK OF A THOUSAND RED LIGHTS FOREVER AND EVER
TRY NOT TO THINK OF TEN PINK ELEPHANTS!

i got 2 flat tires so i gottsta RUN! i got 2 vodka sodas so i gottsta DRINK! i got a prayer and a hope so i gottsta LIVE! how many miles can you fit on one soul before it finally kerplunks and goes back home? how would you know if you are where you want to be then and now you've always been there i ...

This is where we post youtube, vimeo, soundcloud, etc of what you are listening to right now. I'm always eager to get turned on to new music

Tonight God has not smiled on you?

booya...i like that shit man


if you're writing in microsoft word it caps the first word automatically. but this is ancient style so Ton you should be mad at history, too.

keep writing hard!

thats good shit, man. thank you.

i don't fall in love with my poems i just tend to abandon them

welcome Ton Romus!

this is a BYOB, bring your own brain operation.

enjoy your stay

welcome shadowplay!

thank you for your comment, Ton. but this poem isn't about suicide, at least that was not my intention. i am just trying to say it is okay to be sad. in Portland there's a bridge called "suicide bridge" because people jump off it. i once drove by and saw a woman sitting on a stone bench crying "into...

i agree with walt.

i did enjoy the idea of an army of Martha stewarts

and a squadron of dear Abbys

me, myself, i could use an armada of Oprahs



keep writing hard!

yes yes, mark are you into stoicism at all? your post reminded me of that

thank you for reading wireman and judih!

cheers!

got lost a couple times but i do LOVE the way you ended this piece. or shold i say the way you begun this piece?

keep writing hard, Doreen!

it will get so quiet you may think your voice anything less than rivers, tabernackle, spine lifted luminous. you may think you don't belong here: it will get so sad you may think yourself away, sitting on a stone bench, suicide bridge Portland, OR crying into your knees this too is okay. rosary beco...