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by fuchsiafestival!
April 29th, 2015, 11:39 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I'm psyched!
Replies: 4
Views: 1100

Re: I'm psyched!

It's a good thing to be psyched :D

Radiant Aura 8)
by fuchsiafestival!
April 29th, 2015, 1:18 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: timing
Replies: 5
Views: 830

Re: timing

I like the lines

"timing...
that's the puzzle piece,
gotta fit or else,
or else something."

Intriguing. 8)
by fuchsiafestival!
April 29th, 2015, 1:16 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: A place of peace ...
Replies: 11
Views: 1489

Re: A place of peace ...

Art and peace.
by fuchsiafestival!
April 27th, 2015, 7:29 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: storyteller
Replies: 3
Views: 717

Re: storyteller

Truth does have its variations while at the same time being exactly what it is. Perspective plays a huge part in it too. Good and insightful.
by fuchsiafestival!
April 27th, 2015, 12:37 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What are you listening to?
Replies: 28
Views: 5677

Re: What are you listening to?

My friend's electronic mix
by fuchsiafestival!
April 27th, 2015, 12:27 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: general observation
Replies: 28
Views: 4754

Re: general observation

I agree that it is a bit narcissistic to get feedback on a poem but not reply to others.
by fuchsiafestival!
April 27th, 2015, 12:24 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: traversing my mind
Replies: 10
Views: 1403

Re: traversing my mind

Liked this back on GP. Glad to read it again.
by fuchsiafestival!
April 27th, 2015, 12:19 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Survival (Version 2)
Replies: 2
Views: 503

Re: Survival (Version 2)

limbs dangle below smog
from ivory cracks
spanned across the earth
sleepy time lines

examine a coated sea
items tossed into waves;
parchment and water bottles
used long ago

swallows on telephone wires
listen for unfolding years
regarding my only chance
of survival
by fuchsiafestival!
April 26th, 2015, 11:57 pm
Forum: Rant, Rage & Laugh
Topic: Writer's Block
Replies: 3
Views: 1409

Re: Writer's Block

Yes, that's funny.
by fuchsiafestival!
April 26th, 2015, 11:52 pm
Forum: Paintings & Drawings
Topic: Handz 2
Replies: 2
Views: 866

Re: Handz 2

Realistic - good form.
by fuchsiafestival!
April 26th, 2015, 11:50 pm
Forum: Paintings & Drawings
Topic: Redemption
Replies: 3
Views: 978

Re: Redemption

I get a Van Gogh feeling too. He was a cool guy...
by fuchsiafestival!
April 26th, 2015, 11:48 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Dawns Song
Replies: 6
Views: 1145

Re: Dawns Song

Some of the images in this are pretty good. I like the idea of stars being restless. Punchy piece.
by fuchsiafestival!
April 26th, 2015, 11:42 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Survival (Version 2)
Replies: 2
Views: 503

Re: Survival (Version 2)

OK. I believe your revision is going in a positive direction. That said, I'm still unsure what this piece is really attempting to convey. Perhaps "something lost in the past" that N is trying to determine or recall? A bit diffusive and relatively abstract. Played around a bit based on my take: limb...
by fuchsiafestival!
April 26th, 2015, 8:21 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Survival (Version 2)
Replies: 2
Views: 503

Survival (Version 2)

boughs dangle below smog whittled out of an ivory atmosphere skewed across the earth as muffled time lines i examine a jetty sea for items tossed into waves - parchment and ancient water bottles used by jaded stragglers swallows on telephone wires listen for the sound of unfolding years that signify...
by fuchsiafestival!
April 26th, 2015, 2:29 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Survival
Replies: 6
Views: 1166

Re: Survival

I did a version 2, because you're right that some parts could be expanded upon. A few folks have said that version 2 is more in depth and comes across as more personal. boughs dangle below smog whittled out of an ivory atmosphere skewed across the earth as muffled time lines i examine a jetty sea fo...

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