Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

Wow!
EMINEM each yur heart out!

I'm not sure if this was to be read like a rap song but that's how it played in my heart!

Love the internal rhymes...

I want more

as the dark goes on
with all the sounds
that are in it

love the ending lines Mr Mingo, i see the beginning of another poem, so much can go on in the dark and it's journey to the light.

smiles

maree

Sometimes to see you is so far
as if you were an island in the horizon
remote:

but when a change in tide
carries you to me like a small boat
tugging

oh how my ears
prick
to the sound of your waves

i feel the rush of you

and i am anchored
by your sea music.

(C)Maria De Liseo 181210

I love your novel poem revolutionrabbit

more?

quite visual and very sad, but i have to say i really really love the title

A Beautiful expression of your heart Doreen.

Saw, said it right, one doesnt need an army of friends, just one like YOU!

hugs

m

this was just dreamy, absolutely wonderful poetry, thank you for the feel good.

Lines are like a highway systems, if one looks closely, they can take you to many places and tell great stories....just like you did.

really enjoyed Hollweg

profound indeed...

enjoyed

plenty of dance & murga sounds

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hmmm, i like the thought of that.

Enjoyed Arcadia thank you.

This made me wanna stand up and applaud.....

So I did!

Hopefully soon i will be enroling in a course to learn to read and write Spanish so yay, then i will be able to understand your beautiful poetry in Spanish

I wish this was in English, love your poetry Arcadia, you used to submit both spanish and english.

love it Constantine, yur da best!

you make me want to be surrounded by the beauty you describe here.