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wreck me
on your shore

I am
moon drunk

ooh look what i found...those lines ~k, oh my...magnificent!

I need more

Love it!

chronic, you are like an itch in the throat where i am looped and swum through like sea-water which has loosened itself where i am only temporary without a word like exhausted fruit assaulted with the non-happenings you deliver everyday like galloping horses like furious waves at twilight to mock my...

when I am tasted unexpectedly and nakedly and sugarless, I’ll burn the sensitivities of tasting tongues with this – my fullest flavor – as their lungs inhale my menthol effervescence, learn I’m not some candy’s sweet passivity— when I am tasted, I intend to flirt grinning....i lerve this. Nice work...

magnificent as always Joel.

i know when i read you hester, that i'm in for a real treat.

Wonderful writing as always, thank you.

i have seen the long necked women of thai land

the imagery and the flow in this line alone blows me away.
Thank you for that CS.

I want to see it all too, take me with you?

I've read this several times already and am left tongue-tied...but i want to share with you right now Pablo Neruda.... a couple of stanza's from his poem "Wine" Fall wine or spring wine, wine and drinking mates, at a table littered with leaves from the equinox, the Big River of the world blanching t...

Wowser, I'm lost for words... i always love how i feel after i read you Doreen....Just picking myself up off the floor

Thank you Lady.

Bravo indeed!
You are a breath of fresh air Joel.

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Enjoyed your thoughts here Axanderdeath, especially the last few lines.

A pleasure to read you

it is in these autumnal moments that i wear like a necklace the apples of your love each pearl knotted by a festival of dream each dream a carnival, like a parade in fancy dress a traveling show of performing acrobats where i am the clown the entertainer for your amusement when you are bored, belov...

Wow, all four of these touched me deeply, so many wonderful phrases, so vivid. Loved it!

I want you to know just how proud I am of this Joel. How excited I was when you suggested we write together, how excited I still am that we created this poem *smile*
Writing with you is a great honour and a pleasure. I can't wait to do it again...if you're up for it that is.

Thank you

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