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by Perdida
August 29th, 2007, 4:14 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: ya todo es sano / already all is healthy
Replies: 1
Views: 215

Damn, i want to write like you.

Such beauty in your words, that it flows within me.

:D
by Perdida
August 29th, 2007, 4:11 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: por una púrpura mariposa / by a purple butterfly
Replies: 1
Views: 239

omg, your words move me so much that you leave me speechless.

Magnificent!

:D
by Perdida
August 29th, 2007, 4:07 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: lo tomó / s/he took it
Replies: 1
Views: 200

There you go again, collapsing me.

my affection-- s/he took it.
- how could she not.



:)
by Perdida
August 29th, 2007, 4:04 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: good morning tom
Replies: 5
Views: 337

A great write mb, loved the humour in it. loved it all.

:D
by Perdida
August 29th, 2007, 3:54 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: u oculten mis deseos aquí / or hide my desires here
Replies: 6
Views: 351

Nice work Joel - as always :D

especially loved the opening lines and the mention of DT, since your works remind me of him.

m

:)
by Perdida
August 21st, 2007, 6:04 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Do You Love?
Replies: 13
Views: 2298

do you love out loud when you look at life
is love a flying Oh zone that auras over all


oh Judih, love the above lines, this made me feel huge, as in whole as in great. Like i was floating.

Beautiful

P :D
by Perdida
August 20th, 2007, 4:32 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I can touch you only with the corona of time
Replies: 2
Views: 310

Thank you Joel :) your comment is much appreciated. I really love the idea of writing with you. I'll look forward to it.

thanks muchly

P :D
by Perdida
August 15th, 2007, 3:30 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Sonnet:
Replies: 10
Views: 930

Wow. Love it.

:D
by Perdida
August 15th, 2007, 3:21 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: If it ain't got passion, if it ain't got heart...
Replies: 8
Views: 731

Oh I am grinning wide here Dor, I applause you!

woohhoo

Bloody fantastic Lady!

Like i said, you got passion, you got heart. It's how you read this.

Thank you!

P :D
by Perdida
August 12th, 2007, 4:54 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: If it ain't got passion, if it ain't got heart...
Replies: 8
Views: 731

I thought i had replied to this Doreen....
well baby, i can say this for sure, you've got heart, you've got passion.

I know i'm always in for a treat when i read your words. You're a joy Doreen. And yes i'd love to hear you read this one.

P

:D
by Perdida
August 12th, 2007, 4:24 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: On the passing of a friend
Replies: 7
Views: 1380

A deeply moving piece Mr Troll.

thank you

P :)
by Perdida
August 11th, 2007, 12:38 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Up parallel against you
Replies: 4
Views: 644

I sit here in wonder of you.

"Have I but loved a mirror best? "

omg, this line just jumps out, like BANG! Here i am, here it is.

The placement, perfect, i reckon. *smile*

P :D
by Perdida
August 11th, 2007, 12:31 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I’ve waited still for you—and still persist—
Replies: 1
Views: 236

Those first 5 words alone make me sigh, i love reading you.

smile

P
by Perdida
August 11th, 2007, 12:29 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I can touch you only with the corona of time
Replies: 2
Views: 310

I can touch you only with the corona of time

I can touch you only with the corona of time as if my hands are like those of a clock, stretched out and trembling the currents of a moment that hold the smack of your kisses, beloved. With each breath, you are the wave of all waves and with each wave, you carry me, amorous one with the will of thun...
by Perdida
July 21st, 2007, 6:14 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Her face explodes in detailed memories
Replies: 1
Views: 298

just.....beautiful.

p

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