So fine
to see you if only for that time
brief, unsatisfying.....not long enough!
I write it here
though where you'll check who
KNOWS?
Even with 3places to check with
YOU
it
isn't enough, ya know?
Missing isn't so bad
when the sun breaks through
SUDDENLY...and it's you.
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- August 12th, 2008, 6:02 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: one lazy afternoon
- Replies: 2
- Views: 208
miles apart
And then there is really MILES apart and yet we are right next to each other silly girl...think of that lone wolf that is howling...is it for you that he whines...my sadness is YOUR sadness...keep us close in your heart
wannabe hears you!
wannabe hears you!
discover the earth and hands
I REALLY like this one still CS. i read it twice before. It is a bit more poetic than you usually allow; nonetheless it is a story too.creativesoul wrote:ldiscovered who i was
and was not
Good Show! Jolly well done!
Thanks.
- September 20th, 2007, 8:29 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Let Me Follow You Down--Nobility
- Replies: 3
- Views: 534
Awesome2
I really got to taste you on the cabaradio show (which was awesome ALSO). i second CS ...this is awesome. I can hardly beleieve that this has only now three comments!! Whew. This was SOME WORDS, man. Thanks.
- September 20th, 2007, 7:55 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: rubber dux
- Replies: 2
- Views: 431
way you went
Thank you for going, for seeing, for working.
For cleaning to go. For coming back...still whole.
For cleaning to go. For coming back...still whole.
feelings
Please don't ignore them be it male or female or it that encourages(?) YOU to do that. You especially DO NOT Do It!
- September 20th, 2007, 7:50 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: return to portland after mexico
- Replies: 3
- Views: 383
return to portland
[quote="creativesoul"]the sunshine in portland is different than anywhere else in the world, This morning did not start so well. Life seems to break into small glass slivers./quote] And so it is that you have returned and so have all the things you left here. Especially the sunshine and the glass sl...
- September 20th, 2007, 7:37 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: you have been here!
- Replies: 1
- Views: 327
you too
Thank you generous spiritess!
- September 20th, 2007, 7:35 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: 400 in the morning
- Replies: 2
- Views: 351
Re: 400 in the morning
observation and question--at the root of it all. Dear Joel and CS: I just HAD to try this quote thingie out! Thank you Joel for more edification as I pursue my watching of CS. Thanks for being along. Oh for the ONE who doesn't have to be A "the happy one"! You speak so eloquently to this CS. I feel...
- September 20th, 2007, 7:12 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: trusting felt nice, safe
- Replies: 8
- Views: 417
about Joel
Thanks one and all. I have the profound experience of living in the same city, and frequenting the same campus, as CS. It was she who introduced me to this WONDER of a site... studioeight!! In all my days I have been private about MY writing...don't know why? But I do know that SHE touches me. And I...
- September 20th, 2007, 6:49 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: slick on the water
- Replies: 3
- Views: 709
Almost
If the post date is correct here we are ONLY eight days (like a studioeight!) from the 2 year anniversary of your first post!!
Congrats...thought I'd just add that reminder HERE for YOU.
Congrats...thought I'd just add that reminder HERE for YOU.
- July 24th, 2007, 11:57 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: trusting felt nice, safe
- Replies: 2
- Views: 424
the candy
Keep on thinking of the candy...it will mitigate the nicotine.
But don't don't don't give up on the coffee
especially as you go south!
But don't don't don't give up on the coffee
especially as you go south!
- July 20th, 2007, 4:17 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: the forest for the tree
- Replies: 2
- Views: 469
today
Alone today among the tall fairy tale pines I knew to look for you.
Why I cannot say...a feeling, a sense...just knew to look in.
And there. You were. Alas many days has the gloom covered the connection.
Challenged by aggressiveness no. Invoked!
May the day bring you your peace.
And my smile.
Why I cannot say...a feeling, a sense...just knew to look in.
And there. You were. Alas many days has the gloom covered the connection.
Challenged by aggressiveness no. Invoked!
May the day bring you your peace.
And my smile.