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by SmileGRL
March 9th, 2010, 1:37 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: coffee
Replies: 2
Views: 263

thank you for all that. Maybe it's the fact that english is not my first language, which makes my writing simpler. but then it's not always like that, because i like to write "stream of thought" style too and that can get very complicated. :P i'm not too worried about presumptions because it will wo...
by SmileGRL
March 8th, 2010, 4:47 pm
Forum: Stories & Essays
Topic: The big dog blues chapter (revised again)
Replies: 6
Views: 671

let those prose-trees grow! :wink:
by SmileGRL
March 8th, 2010, 4:43 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: suN is near
Replies: 6
Views: 422

thanks miss dori. i missed you guys too. so silly of me to stay away so long. thanks for having me back.

this winter has just been too miserable and too long. but i see suN! & things always look better when the sun is shining.
by SmileGRL
March 8th, 2010, 4:31 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: coffee
Replies: 2
Views: 263

coffee

it was a very innocent kiss like happy birthday or congratulations but her lips were warm and soFt and tasted like coffee oR she kissed me with her warm coffee sipped lips melting over & in. in. in. the world stopped spinning. and for a definitive moment, eVerything made sense afterwards nothing fel...
by SmileGRL
March 8th, 2010, 3:58 pm
Forum: Stories & Essays
Topic: The big dog blues chapter (revised again)
Replies: 6
Views: 671

"He reached for her hand and space inverted with a pop"

love this line
by SmileGRL
March 8th, 2010, 3:16 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: suN is near
Replies: 6
Views: 422

tick tock tick tock. the smiley was so big i almost missed the exclamation marks, mr. mingo. and yet, i did not.
by SmileGRL
March 8th, 2010, 11:33 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Gina
Replies: 9
Views: 478

yes we are. and reached out you did 2. tHat is much appreciated. thank you steve. i watched the new alice in wonderland movie this weekend. and two things the mad hatter said to alice stuck in my head. first he said to her "you have lost your muchness" (trying to explain to her why she isn't the sam...
by SmileGRL
March 8th, 2010, 11:21 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: suN is near
Replies: 6
Views: 422

exactly. thanks for reading deeper.
by SmileGRL
March 5th, 2010, 10:19 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Freedom
Replies: 2
Views: 341

yeah baby
by SmileGRL
March 5th, 2010, 10:18 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: suN is near
Replies: 6
Views: 422

suN is near

this bRoken lullaby. this suNless soul. tears fears. dreams hopes. aches & screams. i stitch them aLL together with sticky fingers writing hoMe. whaT do you caRe what kind of needle i stick into my veins when you’re knitting your oWn song? i cringe i cringe for you sometimes i envy i wish i wish i w...
by SmileGRL
March 5th, 2010, 10:05 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Truth Untold
Replies: 9
Views: 660

hmmm...humility or ego??? both certainly makes us do stupid things. maybe the key is to find balance within and therein perspective & strength, irrespective of others egos. this is one of those things where each has to find his own.

nice pebble in the water poem, barry
by SmileGRL
March 5th, 2010, 9:48 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: THE MYTH
Replies: 10
Views: 752

exactly...what R u doing in my head miss hes??? 8)
by SmileGRL
March 5th, 2010, 9:43 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: not such a bad poem one: design
Replies: 7
Views: 715

i love how this poem starts and i love how it ends.
by SmileGRL
March 5th, 2010, 9:34 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: the dog does no stir
Replies: 5
Views: 680

beautiful writing

and this

The thought that somewhere a hand is missing its balloon, and still the dog does not stir.
by SmileGRL
March 5th, 2010, 9:21 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: No more poetry
Replies: 19
Views: 1057

yes! write a novel. but don't stop writing poetry. i love your poetry, miss dori.

i have started quite a few novels myself just to stop a few chapters in because suddenly the idea didn't seem so original anymore. haha. one of these days i might finish one and be rich. hahaha.

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