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by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 8:50 pm
Forum: Studio8 Announcements
Topic: One of my Short Plays
Replies: 7
Views: 994

Re: One of my Short Plays

Oh my, 68. I'll bet your script is something to behold, and I hope the actors do it justice! Your subject matter strikes at my heart deeply, as I know it does yours. I wish you success and satisfaction that you portrayed a painful difficult scenario in a sensitive intelligent way.
by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 7:46 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Dooby's Road
Replies: 10
Views: 860

Re: Dooby's Road

this is marvelous, just fabulous and vivid imagery, nice rhythm and flow

the Doobies played in my home town in the early 80's
didn't get to see them, sure wish I did

(((loved!)))
by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 7:43 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: killing the job interview
Replies: 9
Views: 675

Re: killing the job interview

thank you Doreen!! it's just simple, and hopefully somewhat clear

thank you too rev, bottoms up!!
by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 6:18 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: the use of nature to fend off demons
Replies: 4
Views: 755

Re: the use of nature to fend off demons

enjoyed this, david

I have this daughter and she's like frikkin Dr. Doolittle
she reads the minds of insects
in minute detail she understands tiny things
it's really cool
you made me think of her

thank you!
by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 5:29 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Horsing Around
Replies: 19
Views: 839

Re: Horsing Around

No! No way. We don't outlaw anything here... even outlaws. Matter of fact, this place is FULL of outlaws. Hah! Only ONE rule here... RESPECT .. respect for each other and respect for copyright. That's it. So then one can respectfully offer a little bit of critique? Because that doesn't seem objecti...
by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 5:09 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Horsing Around
Replies: 19
Views: 839

Re: Horsing Around

Unless you want to just outlaw critique here. Maybe make a regulation that says no critique allowed. Like, maybe not even helpful suggestions or something. I don't know.
by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 5:01 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Horsing Around
Replies: 19
Views: 839

Re: Horsing Around

I don't mind a little critique, a little suggestion here or there, or a question about any of my poems. I'm not above any of that. That's OK ain't it?
by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 3:43 pm
Forum: Studio8 Announcements
Topic: One of my Short Plays
Replies: 7
Views: 994

Re: One of my Short Plays

Excellent!!

Looks like you got top billing. Or is that just random.

I'll bet it's going to be smashing!! Tell us about it, please?

Thanks for sharing this --
by shadowplay
March 26th, 2015, 3:35 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Horsing Around
Replies: 19
Views: 839

Re: Horsing Around

damn it I just now signed in
sorry I'm late

I loved:
hung
tender delicasees
pleasure trap
horny
meta
suspended
martini glass

I loved a lot o' your other shit too

don't stop!!!!!!!!!!!!
by shadowplay
March 25th, 2015, 11:15 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: killing the job interview
Replies: 9
Views: 675

Re: killing the job interview

you can always move little word critters around as you like -- tall drink of woman had a double barrel loaded (or laced) with It's your baby pome. Nurture it. Swaddle it. Wipe its bum. :) sometimes you have to sleep on the baby pome too which is what I'm going to do Thank you, Ton!! yes, saw. thank...
by shadowplay
March 25th, 2015, 11:08 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: A One And a Two
Replies: 16
Views: 1397

Re: A One And a Two

Wasn't Bobby from the original Mickey Mouse Club? He was the guy who was such a good dancer, I remember.
by shadowplay
March 25th, 2015, 7:43 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: killing the job interview
Replies: 9
Views: 675

Re: killing the job interview

I'm up for another round, of course... I did so like the elicit sound of 'laced with'... as if to say you drink her in... and she's laced with substances (like kick-ass quals) that make you give her that kick-ass job maybe my syntax is fucked up....this was meant to portray that SHE is the tall drin...
by shadowplay
March 25th, 2015, 6:52 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: killing the job interview
Replies: 9
Views: 675

killing the job interview

tall drink of woman
laced with double barrel qualifications
stark lapel power heels
fluid gaze
major handshake
right between the eyes










cuz I have one
by shadowplay
March 25th, 2015, 3:51 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: A One And a Two
Replies: 16
Views: 1397

Re: A One And a Two

Oh ya wiki'd him did ya? I did too but didn't notice where it said he was born. Good catch --
by shadowplay
March 25th, 2015, 3:39 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: My sister's new novel is being released!
Replies: 7
Views: 1291

Re: My sister's new novel is being released!

This is tremendous news!! Congrats to her!! Thank you for sharing this with us~

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