love the idea of emily d. in her attic interlude!
keep writing hard Wireman!
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- May 7th, 2015, 3:20 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Following the Outcome of Dawn
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1333
Re: Cycles
this is just great, keep on Doreen! as for a title, i'd like to nominate "I take the size of winter." i was a bit confused with the wording/syntax of this: "My leaves and comes wilt off of hope stems." just kinda clumsy to me. anyhow, thank you for sharing this poem, you done got 'em good :mrgreen:
- April 18th, 2015, 9:41 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Tormenting Thoughts
- Replies: 2
- Views: 435
Re: Tormenting Thoughts by m.n.i.w
"I've loss count of how many times he's taught me lessons that led to tears." do you mean "I've lost count..." ? I thought the ending was rather weak but there's a lot of goodies before that. i enjoyed this line a lot: "I know I should be grateful for my blessings and for the educators we call trage...
Re: Poem
thanks yall
- April 18th, 2015, 9:24 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: beggars ain't ridin'
- Replies: 4
- Views: 745
Re: beggars ain't ridin'
aw yea smell the flowers for a while!
i've got calalillies in my neighbor's yard i've beein eying.
i've got calalillies in my neighbor's yard i've beein eying.
Poem
There are things I’ve been meaning to tell you. My spine might be crooked from sleeping in an sinking bed, but me. The air kind of carves out my lips like mountains and I don’t know how to say goodbye. The way light sort of hits the iris, scares me because I am scared of light. Who else would lift t...
- April 16th, 2015, 5:46 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: madhatter maestro
- Replies: 6
- Views: 849
Re: madhatter maestro
phantasmagorical you say!??!
go on with your bad self WIREMAN!
i dig
go on with your bad self WIREMAN!
i dig
- April 16th, 2015, 5:43 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: cosmic chain of fingers
- Replies: 5
- Views: 830
Re: cosmic chain of fingers
"the bongo player dons his shades so he won't be blinded by the cruelty" if there's any reason to wear some shades, that is a damn good one! i liked your poem, saw. drumming is therapy. for real. i work in mental health and we have drumming circles and people drum and dance and sad people smile. its...
- April 16th, 2015, 5:40 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: If only for the sake of karma...
- Replies: 4
- Views: 701
Re: If only for the sake of karma...
go go gadget Doreen!
this was fun to read, and i am taking the advice with a full heart.
this was fun to read, and i am taking the advice with a full heart.
- April 16th, 2015, 5:38 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Old Watches
- Replies: 2
- Views: 454
Re: Old Watches
Hi Edmund,
I liked this quite a lot. Made me stop, look at my watch and appreciate the ART and WORK that went into it! Well done sir.
my favorite part was when you asked: Where are the old watches now?
keep writing hard!
I liked this quite a lot. Made me stop, look at my watch and appreciate the ART and WORK that went into it! Well done sir.
my favorite part was when you asked: Where are the old watches now?
keep writing hard!
- April 6th, 2015, 5:50 pm
- Forum: Paintings & Drawings
- Topic: The rest of the story...
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1460
Re: The rest of the story...
i dig this a lot, Doreen!
i like how you incorporated some poetry into this. ferlinghetti does a similar thing with some of his paintings. keep em coming!!
i like how you incorporated some poetry into this. ferlinghetti does a similar thing with some of his paintings. keep em coming!!
- April 1st, 2015, 6:50 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: inopportune wardrobe malfunction
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1351
Re: inopportune wardrobe malfunction
i came because "wardrobe malfunction"
i stayed cuz "followed by mad dash back holding ass"
its cool that you could tell it exactly like it happened, props!
you musta left extra early to make it on time?
i stayed cuz "followed by mad dash back holding ass"
its cool that you could tell it exactly like it happened, props!
you musta left extra early to make it on time?
- April 1st, 2015, 12:01 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: monk on monk
- Replies: 6
- Views: 953
Re: monk on monk
there's quite a lot of Monk on youtube.
among my favorite is him and trane:
swell poem, rR! them poets be crazy folks. not to be trusted.
among my favorite is him and trane:
swell poem, rR! them poets be crazy folks. not to be trusted.
Re: april ku
still march
in my zone, tho i do
like to breathe
in my zone, tho i do
like to breathe
- March 26th, 2015, 7:38 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: My sister's new novel is being released!
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2054
Re: My sister's new novel is being released!
congrats to your sister!