Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

seems like every word was thoughtfully picked.

I liked it...here's why I like how you use expressions that are you know pop culture refrences/funny little sides and its different then nessisarily emotional-but no less true, and i like how this used those little refrences but expressed/fit with the theme...i mean it worked. you know if your writt...

I wrote this after an interesting night, i think they team up well like a conversation. My feet are in my shoes Under these lights anything could be true. I act like I’m not sold You smell good, I’ve got to withhold. Your making my head spin I’m talking but I don’t know out of which end. I can feel ...

I love poetry that evokes an emotion of the person writting it.

I like that you can feel it.

I liked this poem a lot.

its always hard to know when to play it cool

aw snap.

I really like this one too

it has this sort of and i'm dylsexic and i know its not going to be spelled right but, your piece has a pacients to it.

a slow and steady pace.

i really liked it!

whats the expression

quality not quantity

pound for pound- hard hitter you are Dor!

also its interesting looking at this convo in the context of some of your more recent poems L-rod. I've been thinking about them a lot lately, the subject matter- hookers and whos best in bed little rythms. its off putting to me, not to say you don't have a right to write them, so much as to say i d...

i quess your wondering why I haven't jumped in yet. well i will tell you. I was on a film set today, the only girl- minus the hair and makeup crew. As you can imagine for many reasons I can speak to this and as usual i'm with the ladies. I was on a set of a movie about men, for men made by men- exce...

different title...it was kind of last minute

pilling...i was wondering what that was.

I love the feeling of pilling. its hard to desccribe but for me a very specific texture/memory.

mindbum always a pleasure to hear your thoughts.

I had the oppertunity to try to learn samba from a young brazilian women i was very much into....she just laughed!

I'd get it right for two seconds and loose it! samba is amazing.

you ever seen samba?

Its strange because the movemnts are fast and yet you look like your not moving.

I liked the end of this one- is it weird for me to say it seemed to have a taste to it?

I really liked these pieces, especially the first post. it feels organic. In the first post, i think talking about the tree you manage to describe a tactile thing, i always try to do that in my work. how does something feel-phsyical qualities you know that sort of thing. I really appreciated it...it...

funny I thought I would get a response from Clay! i was going to write in parenthasis (in the style of Lightning Rod) in all seriousness I got home last night after a night of drinking and dancing and wrote it on here, actually meaning the literal taco, cause i had one when I came home. AI always ea...

I dig- and i mean both the sound when read out loud and the words

We Hold our spit in,
like good gracious ancients.
we are never young again.


like a good Patti Smith Lyric, i think it gains meaning each new time i hear/read it

awesome flow.