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by saw
May 24th, 2008, 5:48 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Check Out the Competition
Replies: 2
Views: 436

this is wild...put a smile on my face...I was a couple of years older when my friends and I formed our first band...we only played Rolling Stones' songs for the first year......they get an A for effort....nice presentation amongst the cacophony .....the poetry is priceless
are you worried ?
by saw
May 24th, 2008, 5:35 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Way Out
Replies: 6
Views: 691

thank you Lrod, I was close to mine as well...both very different men,
but in each case, I reference the way they conducted themselves,
what was important to them all the time.....also thanks to westie, mtmynd, and hester, I enjoyed your feedback....

peace and good health......steve
by saw
May 24th, 2008, 5:26 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Afterlife
Replies: 15
Views: 1879

thanx for the welcome and comments mtmynd and westie, also
thanks mark, my friend...yes, yes, she is a poem
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 6:37 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: This Is What I Call My Baby
Replies: 16
Views: 1384

yes...stiletto is a nice addition...
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 6:34 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Way Out
Replies: 6
Views: 691

The Way Out

we walked in the tall corn, flapping waves of grain like those tv ads at 3 am when channel six goes off the air, and I surely would have been lost if it weren't for granddaddy's knowing footprints to place my little boots inside. He told me stories hour upon hour, sang Mississippi John Hurt songs as...
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 5:52 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: This Is What I Call My Baby
Replies: 16
Views: 1384

superb....it would be tough to pick a favorite stanza, but if I were forced to I'd go with #2....she can do accupuncture with her high heels and my mind reels at her logic I call my baby the Sea of Tranquility because she is on the moon good stuff....loved it
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 5:45 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Afterlife
Replies: 15
Views: 1879

thanx for the welcome, LR........you may be on to something
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 5:42 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: hey hey hey ya hoh
Replies: 15
Views: 1710

loved the ceremonial history...reads like significant ancient lore and should be taught in public schools....we have nearly eliminated rites of passage, and the one you describe is a beautiful rendering of the poet's importance....very enjoyable read, mingo...
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 5:30 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Demon Democracy
Replies: 6
Views: 628

if only we could get a turnout like that above ground...of course it wouldn't matter much which party of "representatives" had the reins...
but at least we would know that voter turnout is the least of our problems....I hear Beelzebub is demanding a recount......
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 5:23 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Swallered by a whale
Replies: 8
Views: 946

I can't think of a healthier way to turn adversity into an asset ....
the only thing we have control over, is our attitude.....
well done, hester-p......

also...enjoyed the musical/ video clip...lightning rod...no words
were necessary
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 5:15 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Afterlife
Replies: 15
Views: 1879

thanx dino, my friend...at last I have found you...no you can't have my telephone number....

Thanks as well for the welcoming, Arcadia, I've never been called
the-past-form-of-seeeeee, but I like it.

Thanks too, to hester-...appreciate your feedback.....
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 11:16 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Afterlife
Replies: 15
Views: 1879

Hey Doreen, thanks for the invitation and thanks for the feedback on the poem.......thanks as well to gypsyjoker and mingo, I appreciate the welcome and the compliments ......
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 8:09 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Afterlife
Replies: 15
Views: 1879

Afterlife

I never take a woman home that I met ten minutes ago in a dive like this unless she uncrosses her legs like Sharon Stone and blows menthol smoke in my face. Nor was I comfortable trying to drive my car with a probing wet tongue in my ear, but I was pleased that I can adapt so quickly. When you excus...
by saw
May 23rd, 2008, 7:52 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: jump back, jack
Replies: 7
Views: 870

aah the music of living...nice effort, upbeat with sustained drive....
oh, so that was you checkin' me out at the supermarket....hi doreen
Lots of feelgood sounds in this one, you should hook up with Wireman.

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