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- May 1st, 2008, 7:56 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - CON-FLICT! -
- Replies: 5
- Views: 507
- April 30th, 2008, 9:09 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - CON-FLICT! -
- Replies: 5
- Views: 507
- CON-FLICT! -
The acquaintance of a Friend once, perhaps twice spoke to me, in a ME moment her, dawning Morns spent deferent, of-sort obeisant to In- clemency, as an augur at a rune , & the Night spent s'mothered into the pillow like she would sten the pulse of imminent Day-Light... Nay enough! Know , not ever, f...
- April 26th, 2008, 12:07 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - ...AND EVER THE SWAIN SHALL BLEAT! -
- Replies: 1
- Views: 228
- ...AND EVER THE SWAIN SHALL BLEAT! -
Males ungrow
tired of their Women...
For, Fifty+ percent
will (be) dissolve, stat
Twenty-five perscent
Stray...
Ten+, in a Cartertisian fuss
Dreamlust...
Ten, tender
Enfantasize...
Five, Persense
Wedded!
?%?
Dis-Solved!
H.e.m
4.25.MMviii.
("Why Can't You Be Like Endicott!?")
tired of their Women...
For, Fifty+ percent
will (be) dissolve, stat
Twenty-five perscent
Stray...
Ten+, in a Cartertisian fuss
Dreamlust...
Ten, tender
Enfantasize...
Five, Persense
Wedded!
?%?
Dis-Solved!
H.e.m
4.25.MMviii.
("Why Can't You Be Like Endicott!?")
- April 14th, 2008, 6:38 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - PEBBLE IN THE POND -
- Replies: 6
- Views: 447
h_p - Welle, yon troubador, thou hath verily o'erwh'lm'd... TY for the efforted, gracious Reply I shall treasure 'mongst fave, indeed! Do you not glean/resonate w/the "pulses" & cadences I am setting-forth, irregular meters tho' they be; the sturm & drang ? I have been a Professional Musician/player...
- April 13th, 2008, 9:33 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - PEBBLE IN THE POND -
- Replies: 6
- Views: 447
- April 12th, 2008, 7:49 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - PEBBLE IN THE POND -
- Replies: 6
- Views: 447
- PEBBLE IN THE POND -
- PEBBLE IN THE POND - Out, out they go in rippled waves, undulating smokey-mirrored rings these concentrics, like Orbs in clouded Spaces there about Diana E'er Supernal , now circles for Faces gone to places else... Yet out they go & go... these rings apulse aquivered beyond this Sun and Antipode, ...
- April 12th, 2008, 7:39 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - YAHWEH ELOHEME'S VILLAINELLE -
- Replies: 3
- Views: 326
- April 10th, 2008, 9:48 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - VANITY FARE -
- Replies: 29
- Views: 2344
Doreen - Yes, you've got the Villanelle form "down;" would you mind, terribly, if I take the liberty here to Work (ReWork) a bit of " Villanelle Magic?" Not a ReWrite of your Work, simply my Style of Crit., w/o agenda... H'H./ H.e.m . Balancing Act I balance on the precipice of here, now and then Wo...
- April 9th, 2008, 12:58 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Observations before or after the departure.
- Replies: 20
- Views: 1007
Doreen - LOLOLOL! YW; Just a bit ago I was toying with some plays/puns, & ironically(?) we've hit upon, near simultaneously: "What's novel about that Novel?, & if It is a novel, Novel then perhaps it ought be readied for Publication before/'round Christmas, released as ' Noel Novel,' a Tale about a ...
- April 9th, 2008, 10:02 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Observations before or after the departure.
- Replies: 20
- Views: 1007
Doreen - "...a few minutes ago," in a few minutes? Hardly seems, 'specially given the syntactical/verbiage/Rhyming-Rhymed/alliterative/engaging-lure Power of this Work; as for the analogy (specious) w/ 'It was a dark and stormy night." any "opening" bears the intriguing-possibility if what ensues pr...
- April 9th, 2008, 7:28 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - ZEA MAYS ELOHEME VILLAINELLE -
- Replies: 1
- Views: 235
- ZEA MAYS ELOHEME VILLAINELLE -
*Note: Dear Reader, this is a duplicate RePost, as in error (acclimating to Studio 8 formats) I Posted among the Replies of a previous Post, & for this reason, hope the Admin. will allow. TY. - ZEA MAYS ELOHEME VILLAINELLE - Zea Mays undresses Crown to Stamien born adorn of flaxen, silk'd tresses Ab...
- April 8th, 2008, 7:04 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - VANITY FARE -
- Replies: 29
- Views: 2344
Doreen - Again, I forgot re: "Title" glitch; OK, this Piece is "ZEA MAYS VILLANELLE; " the 2nd Post is, "YAHWEH ELOHEME'S VILLAINELLE ". TY for the attention, as always to my Work. Both, as noted in the Titles, are of the Villanelle form, a Classical motif developed in the 1800's, patterned after Fr...
- April 8th, 2008, 6:20 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - YAHWEH ELOHEME'S VILLAINELLE -
- Replies: 3
- Views: 326
- YAHWEH ELOHEME'S VILLAINELLE -
...Pass, that 'bureator bound to gag The Joker's lost, toxicator The wits' crack'd, opiator to blow, beauties - 'luwd skag ...Pass, that 'bureator L o n g e s t Winter, shovels Snow, tuberculater So cold, old, cold drag The Joker's lost, toxicator Speeded-up rufees -down, perpetraitor You're the One...
- April 8th, 2008, 6:13 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - VANITY FARE -
- Replies: 29
- Views: 2344
- ZEA MAYS VILLANELLE -
Zea Mays undresses Crown to Stamien born adorn of flaxen, silk'd tresses Abides the guesses B'neath pelisse and pettisworn Zea Mays undresses Sheaths peeled to stealth caresses plucked and shorn of flaxen, silk'd tresses Like Angels' threads not-of-less' Sweetest nibs del amarillo horn Zea Mays und...
- April 7th, 2008, 7:57 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: - VANITY FARE -
- Replies: 29
- Views: 2344
DOREEN/REPLY...
Dear Doreen - TY for broaching, I had been/am a bit flummoxed, as I have been placing the recipient's name in the "Subject" Box, unlike other venues where I am always cognizant of this appellation as a salutation, saw no intrinsic need... Also, curious as to why I am repeatedly asked to "Login" when...