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by HaroHalola
May 1st, 2008, 7:56 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - CON-FLICT! -
Replies: 5
Views: 507

Jen - TY; Others' Work pales (& some, pails) if the comparisons be proffered to Yours; I say this with full faculty, w/o compunction. If I have in-deed contributed to this effort, then my Heart for It has increased in Joyful abundance - TY! H'H.
by HaroHalola
April 30th, 2008, 9:09 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - CON-FLICT! -
Replies: 5
Views: 507

- CON-FLICT! -

The acquaintance of a Friend once, perhaps twice spoke to me, in a ME moment her, dawning Morns spent deferent, of-sort obeisant to In- clemency, as an augur at a rune , & the Night spent s'mothered into the pillow like she would sten the pulse of imminent Day-Light... Nay enough! Know , not ever, f...
by HaroHalola
April 26th, 2008, 12:07 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - ...AND EVER THE SWAIN SHALL BLEAT! -
Replies: 1
Views: 228

- ...AND EVER THE SWAIN SHALL BLEAT! -

Males ungrow
tired of their Women...

For, Fifty+ percent
will (be) dissolve, stat

Twenty-five perscent
Stray...

Ten+, in a Cartertisian fuss
Dreamlust...

Ten, tender
Enfantasize...

Five, Persense
Wedded!

?%?
Dis-Solved!

H.e.m
4.25.MMviii.
("Why Can't You Be Like Endicott!?")
by HaroHalola
April 14th, 2008, 6:38 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - PEBBLE IN THE POND -
Replies: 6
Views: 447

h_p - Welle, yon troubador, thou hath verily o'erwh'lm'd... TY for the efforted, gracious Reply I shall treasure 'mongst fave, indeed! Do you not glean/resonate w/the "pulses" & cadences I am setting-forth, irregular meters tho' they be; the sturm & drang ? I have been a Professional Musician/player...
by HaroHalola
April 13th, 2008, 9:33 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - PEBBLE IN THE POND -
Replies: 6
Views: 447

Hi Judih - TY; What is One to Reply...? to the certitude in the reach of overcoming the impossible? Perhaps this is the Message of the imminent Pesach? Shalom Bayit - H'H./H.e.m.
by HaroHalola
April 12th, 2008, 7:49 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - PEBBLE IN THE POND -
Replies: 6
Views: 447

- PEBBLE IN THE POND -

- PEBBLE IN THE POND - Out, out they go in rippled waves, undulating smokey-mirrored rings these concentrics, like Orbs in clouded Spaces there about Diana E'er Supernal , now circles for Faces gone to places else... Yet out they go & go... these rings apulse aquivered beyond this Sun and Antipode, ...
by HaroHalola
April 12th, 2008, 7:39 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - YAHWEH ELOHEME'S VILLAINELLE -
Replies: 3
Views: 326

Judih - Blessings from "Heaven"... H'H./H.e.m.
by HaroHalola
April 10th, 2008, 9:48 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - VANITY FARE -
Replies: 29
Views: 2344

Doreen - Yes, you've got the Villanelle form "down;" would you mind, terribly, if I take the liberty here to Work (ReWork) a bit of " Villanelle Magic?" Not a ReWrite of your Work, simply my Style of Crit., w/o agenda... H'H./ H.e.m . Balancing Act I balance on the precipice of here, now and then Wo...
by HaroHalola
April 9th, 2008, 12:58 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Observations before or after the departure.
Replies: 20
Views: 1007

Doreen - LOLOLOL! YW; Just a bit ago I was toying with some plays/puns, & ironically(?) we've hit upon, near simultaneously: "What's novel about that Novel?, & if It is a novel, Novel then perhaps it ought be readied for Publication before/'round Christmas, released as ' Noel Novel,' a Tale about a ...
by HaroHalola
April 9th, 2008, 10:02 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Observations before or after the departure.
Replies: 20
Views: 1007

Doreen - "...a few minutes ago," in a few minutes? Hardly seems, 'specially given the syntactical/verbiage/Rhyming-Rhymed/alliterative/engaging-lure Power of this Work; as for the analogy (specious) w/ 'It was a dark and stormy night." any "opening" bears the intriguing-possibility if what ensues pr...
by HaroHalola
April 9th, 2008, 7:28 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - ZEA MAYS ELOHEME VILLAINELLE -
Replies: 1
Views: 235

- ZEA MAYS ELOHEME VILLAINELLE -

*Note: Dear Reader, this is a duplicate RePost, as in error (acclimating to Studio 8 formats) I Posted among the Replies of a previous Post, & for this reason, hope the Admin. will allow. TY. - ZEA MAYS ELOHEME VILLAINELLE - Zea Mays undresses Crown to Stamien born adorn of flaxen, silk'd tresses Ab...
by HaroHalola
April 8th, 2008, 7:04 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - VANITY FARE -
Replies: 29
Views: 2344

Doreen - Again, I forgot re: "Title" glitch; OK, this Piece is "ZEA MAYS VILLANELLE; " the 2nd Post is, "YAHWEH ELOHEME'S VILLAINELLE ". TY for the attention, as always to my Work. Both, as noted in the Titles, are of the Villanelle form, a Classical motif developed in the 1800's, patterned after Fr...
by HaroHalola
April 8th, 2008, 6:20 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - YAHWEH ELOHEME'S VILLAINELLE -
Replies: 3
Views: 326

- YAHWEH ELOHEME'S VILLAINELLE -

...Pass, that 'bureator bound to gag The Joker's lost, toxicator The wits' crack'd, opiator to blow, beauties - 'luwd skag ...Pass, that 'bureator L o n g e s t Winter, shovels Snow, tuberculater So cold, old, cold drag The Joker's lost, toxicator Speeded-up rufees -down, perpetraitor You're the One...
by HaroHalola
April 8th, 2008, 6:13 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - VANITY FARE -
Replies: 29
Views: 2344

- ZEA MAYS VILLANELLE -

Zea Mays undresses Crown to Stamien born adorn of flaxen, silk'd tresses Abides the guesses B'neath pelisse and pettisworn Zea Mays undresses Sheaths peeled to stealth caresses plucked and shorn of flaxen, silk'd tresses Like Angels' threads not-of-less' Sweetest nibs del amarillo horn Zea Mays und...
by HaroHalola
April 7th, 2008, 7:57 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: - VANITY FARE -
Replies: 29
Views: 2344

DOREEN/REPLY...

Dear Doreen - TY for broaching, I had been/am a bit flummoxed, as I have been placing the recipient's name in the "Subject" Box, unlike other venues where I am always cognizant of this appellation as a salutation, saw no intrinsic need... Also, curious as to why I am repeatedly asked to "Login" when...

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