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- July 26th, 2017, 7:41 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: The Magic (just now)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 386
The Magic (just now)
It is a light in the mind the music dancing off of the fingers and up out of the voice the poetry swinging through a deep river dream cold ,clear and free feel the sound deep down beyond your words a forgotten sweet summer kiss the banjo rings out in the night the fiddle holds you spellbound in the ...
- July 24th, 2017, 7:03 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: STARTED TO RAIN 1960
- Replies: 3
- Views: 437
Re: STARTED TO RAIN 1960
Mama knows no hope for love I suppose. The rainy day is felt ,the whole poem has a gray feel to it with just a hint of underlying erotic energy, ,how is it that mama allows them behind a closed door? this is where the poem has that slippery ability to paint anticipation even in a gloomy sort of pict...
- July 24th, 2017, 6:54 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: I Think We Should Shoot
- Replies: 13
- Views: 1024
Re: I Think We Should Shoot
I love the total irony of the poem. where are the gun lovers commentary on this one? (I see " guns save lives ,maybe yours" bullshit bumper stickerI see down here all the time.) The truth is we have a bunch of really insecure men who need something in their pocket to make them feel manly. The NRA ar...
Jeff
Little Jeffery Sessions sat and studied his lessons he then had the thought the law can be bought he decided to take up the profession rise up the old south tradition in condition of legal hate now this rat ended up wanting to be friends with a rich ally cat share the stage his face twitches as his ...
- July 20th, 2017, 7:06 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Lymph glands
- Replies: 5
- Views: 660
Re: Lymph glands
The face she made how words are not needed then it is the energy of the touch tells her more than you need to allow a fear that brought you there to grow find that music and dance that makes you feel alive dive into your art swim in the living clear water and laughter that is who you are now love
Shout Out
It is deep south voice hot wet moldy summer every day rain, high water bacteria tide flesh eating bay no swimming who is winning granddaughter is almost three , we are partners in crime time of my life thinking of wireman sending prayers thinking of you poets real people so far away the little one a...
- July 18th, 2017, 7:51 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Poeta Aetrnam
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1030
Re: Poeta Aetrnam
yes, words have deep power,often forgotten in this age of amplified twitter bullshit.Your poem reminded me to write for the truth of it the song, if you will, your poem woke me up from a sleep of despair for the state of the art when computer programs read the poems and decide who is a poet . The po...
Re: I'm fine
Wow, went through the same story about a year ago , grandma moved in with us ,and only at the last went to a rest home , it was a long hard rain that fell that last year , 92 is a long count, I still see her about at the odd hour, the poem catches the feelings very well for me.
- June 30th, 2017, 10:35 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: FREDERICKS AND SOMETHING NEW 1958
- Replies: 6
- Views: 906
Re: FREDERICKS AND SOMETHING NEW 1958
I saw my little sister and was most concerned for her , then it was sort of explained to me, the poem took me back so many years, so quickly
- June 30th, 2017, 10:32 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: what happened to Bugs Bunny
- Replies: 6
- Views: 846
Re: what happened to Bugs Bunny
I have asked the same question, in a round about way,I always understood why the silly wabbit was cool, just because he was, the tide will turn, it will be fun .
,peace
,peace
Re: / 66 /
I just did the 66 in March , got a harmonica with stainless steel reeds and just having a blast bending notes ,the grass is happy going to seed and so are the birds when it does , speak your mind and let the sun shine do the work it was meant to do, who ever invented the lawn is mowing in hell.
- June 29th, 2017, 6:45 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Future Shock
- Replies: 3
- Views: 411
Re: Future Shock
The time slips away so quickly , workdays soak it up ,turn around and it is gone , I was young out west also.My old age is full of grandkids so for me it is a fine time but I can relate to the poems sentiments ,I miss the energy and optimism I had when I was young. I thought the world was mostly goo...
- June 28th, 2017, 7:58 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: The Last Little Rascal
- Replies: 2
- Views: 407
The Last Little Rascal
A match box of home grown pot now refined to ninety eight present pure T.H.C. industrialized white jacket lab post love in hippy mega money drug culture a three way baby who is your daddy? every body has a gun son or is invested in a bomb get a make a virus kit on the internet kiss a reptillian I ju...
Re: Don't
Good to see the words singing for the gift of living , we circle round in big sweeping orbits but when that island of light comes into view it always reminds me of you
- June 28th, 2017, 6:45 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Where am I?
- Replies: 3
- Views: 412
Re: Where am I?
Then by this strange twist of cyberfate you came in spam to open the door again and let me ramble in , hello folks