Search found 320 matches

by whoaisme
May 10th, 2015, 5:35 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: flipsters
Replies: 7
Views: 1214

Re: flipsters

love the idea of emily d. in her attic interlude!

keep writing hard Wireman!
8)
by whoaisme
May 7th, 2015, 3:20 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Following the Outcome of Dawn
Replies: 10
Views: 1333

Re: Cycles

this is just great, keep on Doreen! as for a title, i'd like to nominate "I take the size of winter." i was a bit confused with the wording/syntax of this: "My leaves and comes wilt off of hope stems." just kinda clumsy to me. anyhow, thank you for sharing this poem, you done got 'em good :mrgreen:
by whoaisme
April 18th, 2015, 9:41 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Tormenting Thoughts
Replies: 2
Views: 435

Re: Tormenting Thoughts by m.n.i.w

"I've loss count of how many times he's taught me lessons that led to tears." do you mean "I've lost count..." ? I thought the ending was rather weak but there's a lot of goodies before that. i enjoyed this line a lot: "I know I should be grateful for my blessings and for the educators we call trage...
by whoaisme
April 18th, 2015, 9:25 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Poem
Replies: 5
Views: 875

Re: Poem

thanks yall :D
by whoaisme
April 18th, 2015, 9:24 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: beggars ain't ridin'
Replies: 4
Views: 745

Re: beggars ain't ridin'

aw yea smell the flowers for a while!

i've got calalillies in my neighbor's yard i've beein eying.

:lol:
by whoaisme
April 16th, 2015, 5:50 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Poem
Replies: 5
Views: 875

Poem

There are things I’ve been meaning to tell you. My spine might be crooked from sleeping in an sinking bed, but me. The air kind of carves out my lips like mountains and I don’t know how to say goodbye. The way light sort of hits the iris, scares me because I am scared of light. Who else would lift t...
by whoaisme
April 16th, 2015, 5:46 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: madhatter maestro
Replies: 6
Views: 849

Re: madhatter maestro

phantasmagorical you say!??!

go on with your bad self WIREMAN!

i dig 8)
by whoaisme
April 16th, 2015, 5:43 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: cosmic chain of fingers
Replies: 5
Views: 830

Re: cosmic chain of fingers

"the bongo player dons his shades so he won't be blinded by the cruelty" if there's any reason to wear some shades, that is a damn good one! i liked your poem, saw. drumming is therapy. for real. i work in mental health and we have drumming circles and people drum and dance and sad people smile. its...
by whoaisme
April 16th, 2015, 5:40 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: If only for the sake of karma...
Replies: 4
Views: 701

Re: If only for the sake of karma...

go go gadget Doreen!

this was fun to read, and i am taking the advice with a full heart.
8)
by whoaisme
April 16th, 2015, 5:38 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Old Watches
Replies: 2
Views: 454

Re: Old Watches

Hi Edmund,

I liked this quite a lot. Made me stop, look at my watch and appreciate the ART and WORK that went into it! Well done sir.

my favorite part was when you asked: Where are the old watches now?

keep writing hard!
by whoaisme
April 6th, 2015, 5:50 pm
Forum: Paintings & Drawings
Topic: The rest of the story...
Replies: 5
Views: 1459

Re: The rest of the story...

i dig this a lot, Doreen!

i like how you incorporated some poetry into this. ferlinghetti does a similar thing with some of his paintings. keep em coming!! :D
by whoaisme
April 1st, 2015, 6:50 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: inopportune wardrobe malfunction
Replies: 7
Views: 1330

Re: inopportune wardrobe malfunction

i came because "wardrobe malfunction"

i stayed cuz "followed by mad dash back holding ass"

its cool that you could tell it exactly like it happened, props!

you musta left extra early to make it on time?
by whoaisme
April 1st, 2015, 12:01 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: monk on monk
Replies: 6
Views: 946

Re: monk on monk

there's quite a lot of Monk on youtube.

among my favorite is him and trane:



swell poem, rR! them poets be crazy folks. not to be trusted. :twisted:
by whoaisme
March 31st, 2015, 11:58 pm
Forum: Haiku
Topic: april ku
Replies: 70
Views: 9664

Re: april ku

still march
in my zone, tho i do
like to breathe
by whoaisme
March 26th, 2015, 7:38 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: My sister's new novel is being released!
Replies: 7
Views: 2027

Re: My sister's new novel is being released!

congrats to your sister!

Go to advanced search