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by sooZen
August 24th, 2016, 7:32 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I THINK TOO MUCH...
Replies: 15
Views: 1726

Re: I THINK TOO MUCH...

Thanks folks! Trying to quiet the mind is a quest of mine.
by sooZen
August 24th, 2016, 8:50 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Please Comment on the Works of Others
Replies: 67
Views: 26769

Re: Please Comment on the Works of Others

Yep, fell in the gravel and cement. I am shaky to start with and use a cane or scooter when I go out but I was without and in the front yard when it happened. Multiple abrasions to toes, feet, knees, hands, elbow and bruises and swelling. Decided to discard my skin (I guess). Being 68 (next month) a...
by sooZen
August 24th, 2016, 12:19 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Please Comment on the Works of Others
Replies: 67
Views: 26769

Re: Please Comment on the Works of Others

Thanks Doreen for your words and thank you judih... yeah, life is kinda hectic here as well what with my fall and injuries and all the stuff going on with the house repairs. When it happens, it happens...
by sooZen
August 23rd, 2016, 11:12 am
Forum: Culture, Politics, Philosophy
Topic: Are you kidding me?
Replies: 6
Views: 2090

Re: Are you kidding me?

we always get what's coming, even so it is a shame the children will get it to i suppose that is what they deserve for being born in times like these oh lordy the sins of the fathers my arse :( No innocents or innocence in this world anymore Sins or virtues of father's hurled Women and children suf...
by sooZen
August 23rd, 2016, 10:26 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Please Comment on the Works of Others
Replies: 67
Views: 26769

Re: Please Comment on the Works of Others

Dor, I want and encourage everyone to write if that is their passion (as it is mine) no matter how badly because that is how we learn. My mistakes have always been the greatest teachers in my journey. And I was just ranting (as I am prone to do on occasion) as your hit one of my 'buttons'. One thing...
by sooZen
August 22nd, 2016, 8:27 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Please Comment on the Works of Others
Replies: 67
Views: 26769

Re: Please Comment on the Works of Others

judih, Sounds interesting...Most of my editing is strictly punctuation, paragraph breaks, awkward phrasing, stuff like that. I wouldn't be interested in changing the gist or the words of the writer and I think it would take a brave soul to agree to such scrutiny. But almost all of the so-called grea...
by sooZen
August 22nd, 2016, 9:54 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Please Comment on the Works of Others
Replies: 67
Views: 26769

Re: Please Comment on the Works of Others

Mom used to tell me..."don't say anything if you can't say anything nice" but she didn't follow that dictum either. It was a "nice" thought but truthfully, most artists, writers, craftspeople have so much of themselves invested in their creations...they really don't want to hear critiques (even cons...
by sooZen
August 22nd, 2016, 8:17 am
Forum: Culture, Politics, Philosophy
Topic: Are you kidding me?
Replies: 6
Views: 2090

Re: Are you kidding me?

mnaz wrote: Donald Effing Trump? Seriously? We are truly a doomed species.
O, I think we deserve what we get... After all, we have doomed many species carelessly, willfully or unknowingly... so "Donald Effing Trump" may be just desserts. Doncha think?
by sooZen
August 22nd, 2016, 8:06 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: cicada heaven
Replies: 1
Views: 332

Re: cicada heaven

reading this poem
is good exercise for
the buzzing in my ear...
by sooZen
August 22nd, 2016, 8:00 am
Forum: Haiku
Topic: Garden Hai's
Replies: 6
Views: 2031

Re: Garden Hai's

with desert rain
a wet mesquite tree
nature's incense

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watching a bee
drown in the hummer feeder
cheers!

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wants out
wants in
the old dog's duty

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that mosquito
hovering around my legs...
terrorist!!!
by sooZen
August 22nd, 2016, 7:32 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I THINK TOO MUCH...
Replies: 15
Views: 1726

Re: I THINK TOO MUCH...

Thanks guys! I think... :wink:
by sooZen
August 21st, 2016, 10:13 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I THINK TOO MUCH...
Replies: 15
Views: 1726

I THINK TOO MUCH...

I THINK TOO MUCH… living in a fragile world where only metal, crude and diamonds are wanted where the death of trees cause not a blink or the demise of the rhino is a byline get it while you can as fast as you can as quick as the flight of a red tailed jet leaving me behind to contemplate this fragi...
by sooZen
July 14th, 2016, 11:42 am
Forum: Haiku
Topic: Garden Hai's
Replies: 6
Views: 2031

Re: Garden Hai's

watering day
100+ in the shade
I'm melting!

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baby dove
watches me
watching

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old dog
has to pee
endlessly

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scarab beetle
far from Egypt
flies

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just
three
words
Haiku?

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my perch
a long view
with benefits
by sooZen
July 10th, 2016, 7:44 pm
Forum: Culture, Politics, Philosophy
Topic: THE GREAT DIVIDE
Replies: 8
Views: 2179

Re: THE GREAT DIVIDE

:)
by sooZen
July 8th, 2016, 7:33 pm
Forum: Culture, Politics, Philosophy
Topic: THE GREAT DIVIDE
Replies: 8
Views: 2179

Re: THE GREAT DIVIDE

Gracias y tu tambien Arcadia! :D

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