Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

Oh my, 68. I'll bet your script is something to behold, and I hope the actors do it justice! Your subject matter strikes at my heart deeply, as I know it does yours. I wish you success and satisfaction that you portrayed a painful difficult scenario in a sensitive intelligent way.

this is marvelous, just fabulous and vivid imagery, nice rhythm and flow

the Doobies played in my home town in the early 80's
didn't get to see them, sure wish I did

(((loved!)))

thank you Doreen!! it's just simple, and hopefully somewhat clear

thank you too rev, bottoms up!!

enjoyed this, david

I have this daughter and she's like frikkin Dr. Doolittle
she reads the minds of insects
in minute detail she understands tiny things
it's really cool
you made me think of her

thank you!

No! No way. We don't outlaw anything here... even outlaws. Matter of fact, this place is FULL of outlaws. Hah! Only ONE rule here... RESPECT .. respect for each other and respect for copyright. That's it. So then one can respectfully offer a little bit of critique? Because that doesn't seem objecti...

Unless you want to just outlaw critique here. Maybe make a regulation that says no critique allowed. Like, maybe not even helpful suggestions or something. I don't know.

I don't mind a little critique, a little suggestion here or there, or a question about any of my poems. I'm not above any of that. That's OK ain't it?

Excellent!!

Looks like you got top billing. Or is that just random.

I'll bet it's going to be smashing!! Tell us about it, please?

Thanks for sharing this --

damn it I just now signed in
sorry I'm late

I loved:
hung
tender delicasees
pleasure trap
horny
meta
suspended
martini glass

I loved a lot o' your other shit too

don't stop!!!!!!!!!!!!

you can always move little word critters around as you like -- tall drink of woman had a double barrel loaded (or laced) with It's your baby pome. Nurture it. Swaddle it. Wipe its bum. :) sometimes you have to sleep on the baby pome too which is what I'm going to do Thank you, Ton!! yes, saw. thank...

Wasn't Bobby from the original Mickey Mouse Club? He was the guy who was such a good dancer, I remember.

I'm up for another round, of course... I did so like the elicit sound of 'laced with'... as if to say you drink her in... and she's laced with substances (like kick-ass quals) that make you give her that kick-ass job maybe my syntax is fucked up....this was meant to portray that SHE is the tall drin...

tall drink of woman
laced with double barrel qualifications
stark lapel power heels
fluid gaze
major handshake
right between the eyes










cuz I have one

Oh ya wiki'd him did ya? I did too but didn't notice where it said he was born. Good catch --

This is tremendous news!! Congrats to her!! Thank you for sharing this with us~