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by saw
May 26th, 2008, 7:32 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The War, and other Filthy Socialism
Replies: 3
Views: 402

this point in history poses an interesting dilemma for citizens that have been lulled to sleep my an endless array of entertainment gizmos.... apathy won't get it done...and given the tanking economy, we're all gonna have a lot of time on our hands....will we get out in the streets, will we go back ...
by saw
May 26th, 2008, 7:25 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Riff Genius
Replies: 3
Views: 400

one lie after another, one crime after the next...in a perfect world
the lot of them would be tried for war crimes....as you point out, these riffs should not be forgotten ...many good lines, mnaz
by saw
May 26th, 2008, 7:09 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Wisdom of the Lumberjack
Replies: 3
Views: 432

thanx, mtmynd and mnaz....my intention was twofold with this one..
one...to honor the majesty of trees, the great service they provide,
and the sadness when they are cut indiscriminately.....
and two..the poem as metaphor, to express the dangers of being
closed minded....
by saw
May 25th, 2008, 8:50 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: All we have is Now (and Then)
Replies: 6
Views: 634

perhaps your awareness of the phenomenon will make you better able
to live in the present, a most difficult achievement for our wandering minds that love nostalgia and planning our days....like John Lennon
said..."Life is what happens while your busy making other plans"
by saw
May 25th, 2008, 8:34 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Wisdom of the Lumberjack
Replies: 3
Views: 432

The Wisdom of the Lumberjack

anyone can fell a tree, but can you keep the tree from killing you ? Trees don't always fall exactly where you intend, sometimes they bounce off a neighboring branch. If you are standing too close you could be injured...or worse. Always consider the wind, the lean and the balance. If the kerf is clo...
by saw
May 25th, 2008, 7:27 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Gobuttzian Age
Replies: 4
Views: 481

it may be too late...the dumbing down is working like a charm.... thank the stars for poets...their imagination is boundless.... as for wars on nebulous things like TERROR...wars that are intended they say, to insure our freedom...I hope there are enough of us around to demand the answer to the ques...
by saw
May 25th, 2008, 1:51 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Gobuttzian Age
Replies: 4
Views: 481

The Gobuttzian Age

Who could have known they weren't human, those evil spin doctors - subliminal messages, of course, so easy, so technology friendly. Every time you log on to your computer from deep in the bowels of your hard drive, Gobuttzian images are secretly being stored in your cranial basement, every time you ...
by saw
May 25th, 2008, 1:23 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Ghosts of the New Orleans Night
Replies: 6
Views: 712

a wonderful journey through the memory...
I felt as if were on a magic carpet, sharing the intimacies of the
author....poor New Orleans...she will never be the same....
by saw
May 25th, 2008, 1:16 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Mr. Potato Heart---mock sonnet
Replies: 7
Views: 567

a most interesting way to describe the amazing powers of rejuvenation, rebirth if you will....give the heart even a slim chance, and it will fool you every time.....its capabilities seem endless...I have seen the kindest expressions in my times of need, from people I never could have believed had it...
by saw
May 25th, 2008, 1:05 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: If'n U Move Me
Replies: 4
Views: 535

is molly a golden retriever, wireman ? love their cosmic personalities...
you paint a very laid back scene...reminded me of Alice's Restaurant...
"you can get anything you want...........
by saw
May 24th, 2008, 6:00 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: more notes from the forefront
Replies: 7
Views: 447

visually appealing...like a jazzed eye chart....

metaphorically, it could represent the racial tensions that still exist to some degree today, the red...bloodshed

in either case, it works.....
by saw
May 24th, 2008, 5:54 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Dammed metaphor
Replies: 5
Views: 571

hey mnaz...I've picked myself up from that rippled cosmic gutter numerous times....this is great....a friend sent me a cartoon from the New Yorker the other day, titled Hecklers at a Poetry Reading.... and one audience member is yelling up to the poet on stage, "Hey, you call that a metaphor ?"........
by saw
May 24th, 2008, 5:48 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Check Out the Competition
Replies: 2
Views: 436

this is wild...put a smile on my face...I was a couple of years older when my friends and I formed our first band...we only played Rolling Stones' songs for the first year......they get an A for effort....nice presentation amongst the cacophony .....the poetry is priceless
are you worried ?
by saw
May 24th, 2008, 5:35 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Way Out
Replies: 6
Views: 691

thank you Lrod, I was close to mine as well...both very different men,
but in each case, I reference the way they conducted themselves,
what was important to them all the time.....also thanks to westie, mtmynd, and hester, I enjoyed your feedback....

peace and good health......steve
by saw
May 24th, 2008, 5:26 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Afterlife
Replies: 15
Views: 1877

thanx for the welcome and comments mtmynd and westie, also
thanks mark, my friend...yes, yes, she is a poem

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