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collaboration wanted on Behind the Scenes

Post by judih » May 13th, 2022, 5:52 am

behind the scenes mp3.mp3
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So, I've got this poem that I originally wrote at the beginning of the 2000's but updated it.
I recorded it, and then, as now, I see it as something more - a more kinesthetic experience.
Artists? Photographers? Audio buffs? i'm calling you (without being specific).

Who wants to help?

Behind-the-scenes, judih

She was used to it,
her parts around the room,
calves grazing by the window
knees in temporary squats
elbows wide to guard the hallway.

till doorbells rang
and she’d scurry
to assemble her compartments
equip her gaunt corridors
wring out soaking hands to reapply her visage

and opening the door,
she’d greet her other side

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Re: collaboration wanted on Behind the Scenes

Post by saw » November 28th, 2024, 9:38 am

so wonderful to hear judih's voice
and delivery
miss you so much
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: collaboration wanted on Behind the Scenes

Post by winddance » November 28th, 2024, 12:38 pm

and thank you saw for bringing this one forward. I miss her too.
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing than teach 10,000 stars how not to dance.
e e cummings

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Re: collaboration wanted on Behind the Scenes

Post by Arcadia » December 1st, 2024, 10:38 am

What powerful is poetic voice!! 💗Lovely & also bittersweet to listen again to Judih's one today in this thread , gracias!🙌

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