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[Axanderdeath]

It is annoying to sit and read all this shit! Not that all of you guys write horrible stuff and I write amazing stuff, no, what bothers me the most is you all think you can tell me a thing or two and I have nothing to say to you that is valid. Are any of you published? I mean that. Really published not a chap book or an E-book that you paid somebody to do for you and you sold it to your mom, not that. That is nothing. You are all in the same boat as me weather you like it or not. Most of the stuff on here (including my work) is not very good, really, and it bores me but nobody will say “hey man that was pretty predictable,” or “that was frankly bad stuff.” The only person you can say that to is me. Why because you do not get my stuff, and you are all too educated to be spontaneous and really enjoy your own boring word play about Greeks and Romans doing little boys in the summer, but put in a clever little shit poem. Anyway I am tired of being shit on here so fuck you all…. Have a happy time lying to each other!


Geoff Parsons

[Lightning Rod]

c'mon Geoff

quit crying and write something.

[Arcadia]

do you want flowers or fruits?. I´ll check your posts.
"your own boring word play about Greeks and Romans doing little boys in the summer": that´s good!.
saludos,

Arcadia

[jimboloco]

get back JoJo

you want some attention?

see a therapist
why are you pissed?
somethine missed.
love, simple affection.
love of self.
love of others.

deep sadness.
alienation is ok.
seething anger implores one to madness.

[mousey1]

As Florist Gump would say,

"Shit is as shit does!!!" Well we've got the manure let's plant some flowers!

You've been given some really good, helpful critiques on your work here and have basically shit on them so I'll shed no tears for you. Start taking the craft seriously and maybe people will start taking your writing seriously. It's shoddy work, slapped and dashed together with not a care or concern given to the poor sod who has to read it! If your goal is to be published and read then be prepared to do some fucking work!

Lazyass ways! They'll get you nowhere man! Unless you win the lottery!

[jimboloco]

Mousey, I droool a bit for you. Just a wee bit, mind you.

[mousey1]

Your drool is showing!!!!

[jimboloco]

a droll drool
a true fool who'll
duel for you'll

[mousey1]

Hai ku
Touche
Eh

[Southbound Snackyderm]

Someone found Crack buggering Pop in their cereal this morning...

[hester_prynne]

what was snap doin?

By the way Geoff, let me know when your snit is over.
(nicely written by the way....I could really feel it!
H

[Southbound Snackyderm]

Snap was busy putting the finishing touches on his painfully tedious compendium of puttery titled: 'Sure I'm Nowhere Near as Good at This Crap as Dr. Seuss, But Would it Kill You to Tell Me I'm Great Anyway?'

ps--it's Crackle, isn't it--not Crack? Who's Crack? Sigh...

[jimboloco]

snap, crack, and pop
com·pen·di·um of pendulums
swinging to and fro
jojo 1in·car·nates
soggy rice not-cripziez
wrathful damned dieties
aks me agin
i'll spew bloody pietiez
i love you man!
wake up, pup,
woof woof woof!
how bad can you write
be trite
tirade of fright
terror light
dismayed delight
born agin
into the dusks of
plucked clucked feathers
yankee doodle dandiez
bandied about
shouting out
i need to scream
i need to cream
i need to ream
or not
is that the question?
dr zeuzz
made no excuze me paleeze
to his muze
jojo growing roots
for the home team
that left town
no more cracker jacks
just pearly snow and
horny red roses.....
in·val·i·da·ting my in·val·i·di·di·ti·ty.