What is up?

Go ahead. Talk about it.
Post Reply
User avatar
Axanderdeath
Posts: 954
Joined: December 20th, 2004, 9:24 pm
Location: montreal or somewhere in canada or the world

What is up?

Post by Axanderdeath » October 9th, 2005, 9:36 am

Don't like the story? Whatever--look it is not finished but I know some of you read at least some of it. \There is 25 veiws on it... Anyway if you are all scrad \i ll get psyco--any way if you read it thanks...
thus spoke G.A.P.

User avatar
stilltrucking
Posts: 20646
Joined: October 24th, 2004, 12:29 pm
Location: Oz or somepLace like Kansas

Post by stilltrucking » October 9th, 2005, 10:58 am

I think I liked it Geoff but everything is so vague for me now a days. I am nearly up shit creek with out a

I read the story Geoff. Just not ready to comment on it. I will try to read it again. I am having a hard time staying focused on anything longer than a paragraph. I am operating in a very dim light. Give it time. I have seen some great stuff get posted and go for months without replies. Then someone stumbles on it and replies.

Keep on writing

User avatar
Axanderdeath
Posts: 954
Joined: December 20th, 2004, 9:24 pm
Location: montreal or somewhere in canada or the world

Post by Axanderdeath » October 9th, 2005, 12:50 pm

thanks trucking.

about the paragraphs and hard on the eyes, sorry, i tryed to split it up? Thanks for reading it once--you don't have to comment.
thus spoke G.A.P.

User avatar
Rat Bag
Posts: 173
Joined: May 17th, 2005, 6:30 pm
Location: South

Post by Rat Bag » October 9th, 2005, 8:45 pm

Why the desperation, brother?
So you wrote a story, big fuckin' deal!
Replies will be made if and when they are meant to be.
Besides, did you write it for the sole purpose of posting for replies?
Or did you write it for more personal reasons?
This is the centre of the universe.
My tribe is gathered around me.
Behold me.
I AM.

User avatar
Axanderdeath
Posts: 954
Joined: December 20th, 2004, 9:24 pm
Location: montreal or somewhere in canada or the world

Post by Axanderdeath » October 10th, 2005, 4:37 pm

Rat Bag wrote:Why the desperation, brother?
So you wrote a story, big fuckin' deal!
Replies will be made if and when they are meant to be.
Besides, did you write it for the sole purpose of posting for replies?
Or did you write it for more personal reasons?
It is nice to get feedback. And no I did not write it for posting. I have more, and I have more to write. I was just converting it from a note book and got happy and posted it here. I am not angry here--your waiting for me to get angry. I was just wondering--ok ratbag?
thus spoke G.A.P.

User avatar
Rat Bag
Posts: 173
Joined: May 17th, 2005, 6:30 pm
Location: South

Post by Rat Bag » October 11th, 2005, 9:24 pm

Way to maintain an even temerement, bro!
Well, I wasn't waiting for it, but expecting it.
I thought you were being like "I wrote something
so please heap praise onto me lest I die without it"
but if it's all about you happy posting
then I withdraw the rebuke
This is the centre of the universe.
My tribe is gathered around me.
Behold me.
I AM.

Post Reply

Return to “General Discussion”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests