should the shoulder spell pel write....
should the shoulder spell pel write....
shoulder. thats a tough one when you've been searching for that thing that seperates should from her.
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Her, hurt, hertz; I have these friends, and I wait on them, but they don't wait on me. We are all free to do our own thing, but if in a relationship of some kind, and if you want to MAINTAIN that relationship, then there is certain shit you have to do. You have to wait for me like I wait on you or else I feel like you don't have fucking respect for me and I can't remake friends, man. Fuck you guys.
I am looking for a home for my thoughts.
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I think tom waits said it all in hes emotional weather report.
Makes differece what respect I got for you baby.
DO you respect your self.
Hey I was just looking for a place to put my first post of the day
what i was thinking about was CIA, Rendition, when is the last time anyone in the american intlligence services got anything right about anything. I don't mean those guys that were purged by the director for "disloyalty". Makes me think of catch 22, the pilots could not get their parachutes unless they signed a loyalty oat to Milo Minder industries or sumpun.
Yabyum you know my zipper is rusted
I say nevermore
I got my withdrawl card
From the mother hood of brother fuckers
and hopeless romantics
what seperates us
I mean what seperates her from me
not the hair on her shoulder
not that laser sweep of her side long glances
Another thing I like about her is she don't have to shave much for a old girl
Well its my birthday you schmuck, I like that bit in the Hobbit were on your birthday you gave presents instead of recieve.
bring it on punk
Makes differece what respect I got for you baby.
DO you respect your self.
Hey I was just looking for a place to put my first post of the day
what i was thinking about was CIA, Rendition, when is the last time anyone in the american intlligence services got anything right about anything. I don't mean those guys that were purged by the director for "disloyalty". Makes me think of catch 22, the pilots could not get their parachutes unless they signed a loyalty oat to Milo Minder industries or sumpun.
Yabyum you know my zipper is rusted
I say nevermore
I got my withdrawl card
From the mother hood of brother fuckers
and hopeless romantics
what seperates us
I mean what seperates her from me
not the hair on her shoulder
not that laser sweep of her side long glances
Another thing I like about her is she don't have to shave much for a old girl
Well its my birthday you schmuck, I like that bit in the Hobbit were on your birthday you gave presents instead of recieve.
bring it on punk

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Re: should the shoulder spell pel write....
This post proves to me that I have a hard time understanding a lot of what's posted on the internet superhighway.YABYUM wrote:shoulder. thats a tough one when you've been searching for that thing that seperates should from her.
I don't understand the post.
And I didn't understand the two replies so far.

Oh well.
I never claimed to be too bright.

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Now how do you deconstruct that?Shoulder.
Separates should from her.
Should from her
Now when men speak about her(s) they usually mean a boat, she is a might fine sailing ship
Or sometimes they refer to trucks, pardon me while I stir that big bitch up
Occasionally but not very often they may be referring to a female Cro-Magnon most dangerous of the species female
I suppose it was all clear as mud until I posted to it and confused everyone
Doreen I never try to figure yabyum’s words out. He has batted some grand slam lines to me. A couple of lines I may carry to my grave. One can’t forget
Quoted from my fawlty memory.“I know the location of every crumb of happiness that has fallen through the cracks”
I just looked at the post as word play
I liked it but got dam me they ought to take a rope and hang me because I was thinking about a woman's shoulders, sexist pig that I am.
what should a man do about her
What did the little dog say to the big dog?you don't have fucking respect for me and I can't remake friends, man. Fuck you guys.
Lovingpenful I obviously did not get yabyum's disrespect for you, I just like the thing, I don't think I read your reply

It boggles my mind. I saw know disrespect, I didn't realy see anything much except the words "the should that seperates from her" resonated for some reason and I wanted to play. I got a lot of respect for you, that piece that you wrote for eye witness reports about the endigenous people living in the moment was very interestingand the writtting was great to.
I respect you, but would you respect me in the morning?
attn: wired to poet cybernaughts
yeah you space cadets
out ther exploring new
and invigorating word territories
in cyber place,
yeah you who have embarked
on a new adventure in
writing genres,
yeah you....cybernaughts of poetry
don't ya think that's kinda special??????????
out ther exploring new
and invigorating word territories
in cyber place,
yeah you who have embarked
on a new adventure in
writing genres,
yeah you....cybernaughts of poetry
don't ya think that's kinda special??????????
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ten four mark, I did not get it but I felt it, and it was pure GO.
that is how i saw it
I had a young guy who told me I had "latched on" to him. I suppose I spent too much time tell him how much I dug his stuff.
but there it is
I dug it
made me want to just GO with it.
that is how i saw it
Expectations, I always have souch expectations, I am the one that can see the emperors new clothes.don't ya think that's kinda special??????????
I had a young guy who told me I had "latched on" to him. I suppose I spent too much time tell him how much I dug his stuff.
but there it is
I dug it
made me want to just GO with it.
.....
if it makes you feel any better.......I have no idea what it means either. Just some fucking word play , man. I don't think lovingpenfull was directing that shit at me. Funny what a simple foolish line can start. I love words.
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or the police......
wireman.....you wrote about yippie chicks, thats funny. I am reading 'Revolution for the hell of it'' and 'Fuck the System' by Abbie Hoffman. What an interesting man.
wireman.....you wrote about yippie chicks, thats funny. I am reading 'Revolution for the hell of it'' and 'Fuck the System' by Abbie Hoffman. What an interesting man.
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I like the way he signed off on his letters
Bring in the clowns,
rest in peace abbie
I think he died from an occupational hazard for people who fight the good fight. A broken heart.infriendship
http://etd.lsu.edu/docs/available/etd-1 ... s-Done.pdfAbstract
The following thesis is a discussion of the radical activist Abbie Hoffman’s theatrical work to revolutionize the United States. What the author does is explain the historical uniqueness of Hoffman’s theatrical techniques as tools for social change. What made Abbie
Hoffman such a unique character from that already bizarre and devastating time in the United States known as The Sixties was his ability to infuse pot with politics, fun with social activism and cultural change with his contemporary means of ommunication. He was able to excite and activate a whole generation of people who would otherwise drop out of society rather than become involved by walking a thin line between being a revolutionary and being a clown.
Bring in the clowns,
rest in peace abbie
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Re: .....
I should have known.YABYUM wrote:if it makes you feel any better.......I have no idea what it means either. Just some fucking word play , man. I don't think lovingpenfull was directing that shit at me. Funny what a simple foolish line can start. I love words.
I don't know what half of what I write means, either.
My first love was with Words.
He was a handsome fella and he knew it in his head.
He had many lines, and it's totally absurd,
but I believed every one that he said.
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