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should the shoulder spell pel write....

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 7:40 am
by YABYUM
shoulder. thats a tough one when you've been searching for that thing that seperates should from her.

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 10:09 am
by lovingpenfull
Her, hurt, hertz; I have these friends, and I wait on them, but they don't wait on me. We are all free to do our own thing, but if in a relationship of some kind, and if you want to MAINTAIN that relationship, then there is certain shit you have to do. You have to wait for me like I wait on you or else I feel like you don't have fucking respect for me and I can't remake friends, man. Fuck you guys.

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 12:02 pm
by tinkerjack
I think tom waits said it all in hes emotional weather report.
Makes differece what respect I got for you baby.
DO you respect your self.
Hey I was just looking for a place to put my first post of the day
what i was thinking about was CIA, Rendition, when is the last time anyone in the american intlligence services got anything right about anything. I don't mean those guys that were purged by the director for "disloyalty". Makes me think of catch 22, the pilots could not get their parachutes unless they signed a loyalty oat to Milo Minder industries or sumpun.

Yabyum you know my zipper is rusted
I say nevermore
I got my withdrawl card
From the mother hood of brother fuckers
and hopeless romantics
what seperates us
I mean what seperates her from me
not the hair on her shoulder
not that laser sweep of her side long glances
Another thing I like about her is she don't have to shave much for a old girl

Well its my birthday you schmuck, I like that bit in the Hobbit were on your birthday you gave presents instead of recieve.
bring it on punk :arrow:

Re: should the shoulder spell pel write....

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 2:30 pm
by Doreen Peri
YABYUM wrote:shoulder. thats a tough one when you've been searching for that thing that seperates should from her.
This post proves to me that I have a hard time understanding a lot of what's posted on the internet superhighway.

I don't understand the post.

And I didn't understand the two replies so far.

:shock:

Oh well.

I never claimed to be too bright. :lol:

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 2:32 pm
by K&D
yeah like i thought i understood the post individually but that they don't make sence together.

people ran with what he posted and talked about relationships with women? is that what happened.

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 6:03 pm
by tinkerjack
Shoulder.

Separates should from her.
Now how do you deconstruct that?
Should from her
Now when men speak about her(s) they usually mean a boat, she is a might fine sailing ship
Or sometimes they refer to trucks, pardon me while I stir that big bitch up
Occasionally but not very often they may be referring to a female Cro-Magnon most dangerous of the species female

I suppose it was all clear as mud until I posted to it and confused everyone

Doreen I never try to figure yabyum’s words out. He has batted some grand slam lines to me. A couple of lines I may carry to my grave. One can’t forget
“I know the location of every crumb of happiness that has fallen through the cracks”
Quoted from my fawlty memory.

I just looked at the post as word play
I liked it but got dam me they ought to take a rope and hang me because I was thinking about a woman's shoulders, sexist pig that I am.
what should a man do about her
you don't have fucking respect for me and I can't remake friends, man. Fuck you guys.
What did the little dog say to the big dog?

Lovingpenful I obviously did not get yabyum's disrespect for you, I just like the thing, I don't think I read your reply :oops:

It boggles my mind. I saw know disrespect, I didn't realy see anything much except the words "the should that seperates from her" resonated for some reason and I wanted to play. I got a lot of respect for you, that piece that you wrote for eye witness reports about the endigenous people living in the moment was very interestingand the writtting was great to.

I respect you, but would you respect me in the morning?

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 7:27 pm
by WIREMAN
i don't understand it, but i sure do feel it........

attn: wired to poet cybernaughts

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 7:33 pm
by WIREMAN
yeah you space cadets
out ther exploring new
and invigorating word territories
in cyber place,

yeah you who have embarked
on a new adventure in
writing genres,

yeah you....cybernaughts of poetry
don't ya think that's kinda special??????????

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 7:43 pm
by tinkerjack
ten four mark, I did not get it but I felt it, and it was pure GO.

that is how i saw it



don't ya think that's kinda special??????????
Expectations, I always have souch expectations, I am the one that can see the emperors new clothes.

I had a young guy who told me I had "latched on" to him. I suppose I spent too much time tell him how much I dug his stuff.

but there it is
I dug it
made me want to just GO with it.

.....

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 7:57 pm
by YABYUM
if it makes you feel any better.......I have no idea what it means either. Just some fucking word play , man. I don't think lovingpenfull was directing that shit at me. Funny what a simple foolish line can start. I love words.

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 8:02 pm
by WIREMAN
i loves em too!!!
& if ya wanna find out
how mucho importante they be
just say the wrong thing to yer
wife or girlfriend.................

....

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 8:14 pm
by YABYUM
or the police......

wireman.....you wrote about yippie chicks, thats funny. I am reading 'Revolution for the hell of it'' and 'Fuck the System' by Abbie Hoffman. What an interesting man.

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 8:25 pm
by WIREMAN
he was cool, he was underground then,
he'd be around when he came to dc, ya
never knew who'd pop into the organ.......

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 9:06 pm
by tinkerjack
I like the way he signed off on his letters
infriendship
I think he died from an occupational hazard for people who fight the good fight. A broken heart.
Abstract
The following thesis is a discussion of the radical activist Abbie Hoffman’s theatrical work to revolutionize the United States. What the author does is explain the historical uniqueness of Hoffman’s theatrical techniques as tools for social change. What made Abbie
Hoffman such a unique character from that already bizarre and devastating time in the United States known as The Sixties was his ability to infuse pot with politics, fun with social activism and cultural change with his contemporary means of ommunication. He was able to excite and activate a whole generation of people who would otherwise drop out of society rather than become involved by walking a thin line between being a revolutionary and being a clown.
http://etd.lsu.edu/docs/available/etd-1 ... s-Done.pdf

Bring in the clowns,
rest in peace abbie

Re: .....

Posted: December 7th, 2005, 10:02 pm
by Doreen Peri
YABYUM wrote:if it makes you feel any better.......I have no idea what it means either. Just some fucking word play , man. I don't think lovingpenfull was directing that shit at me. Funny what a simple foolish line can start. I love words.
I should have known.

I don't know what half of what I write means, either.

My first love was with Words.
He was a handsome fella and he knew it in his head.
He had many lines, and it's totally absurd,
but I believed every one that he said.