Kick out da Jams, Man!
- Doreen Peri
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daughters provide surprises
in thin air moments, love made alive
by blood connection, their eyes
wonder-wide
whether at
six months or thirty years.
mine is twelve this month.
she pulls me nearer
to truths by the innocence
of jacks, she tracks fear
tears with a ray gun,
then questions why
i'm stunned by the hit.
(glad to hear this, mark!....
truly wish i could have been here)
in thin air moments, love made alive
by blood connection, their eyes
wonder-wide
whether at
six months or thirty years.
mine is twelve this month.
she pulls me nearer
to truths by the innocence
of jacks, she tracks fear
tears with a ray gun,
then questions why
i'm stunned by the hit.
(glad to hear this, mark!....
truly wish i could have been here)
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true, the fire of action
tolerates no friction
straight out to ya
nipple rodeo
riding the words
as they see fit
(suggestion: let's alter the 3 pm format. Too late for my bucking bronco brain and slap dab in the middle of your daily bread. wired steals the laptop of his nearest victim. let's change the time to a.m. and see what happens)
evening, hostess lady.
j
tolerates no friction
straight out to ya
nipple rodeo
riding the words
as they see fit
(suggestion: let's alter the 3 pm format. Too late for my bucking bronco brain and slap dab in the middle of your daily bread. wired steals the laptop of his nearest victim. let's change the time to a.m. and see what happens)
evening, hostess lady.
j
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bare-breasted
suggestions in a pm
or am format should
always be considered
by a fiction writer.
good evenings
are daily bread
victims in see-fit
garments,
when laptops
are stolen
one by
won.
let's see
what happens
straight out to us,
too late for bronco
bucking brain slaps.
(heh
good morning, miss jude....
what time do you suggest?)
suggestions in a pm
or am format should
always be considered
by a fiction writer.
good evenings
are daily bread
victims in see-fit
garments,
when laptops
are stolen
one by
won.
let's see
what happens
straight out to us,
too late for bronco
bucking brain slaps.
(heh
good morning, miss jude....
what time do you suggest?)
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- Doreen Peri
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the chimes ring this sunny morn
in baltimore land of my reborn, the
breaking of another day, the plan
make my walkin' the dog get away
up on locust point the joint that
inspired "O Say Can"t Ya See"
out there I will reflect on the way
we all connect in this word jam that
is beyond compare.....thank you judih
thank you anemone and deb and -D
and even my own lil offspring down in
virginia skipperbear took the chance to
dare...so I'll head up to Ft. McHenry with
Zaar dog once again ...look out on the
harbor reflecting on this wonderful jam
time that has been, thank you all who
participated once again...........wired
in baltimore land of my reborn, the
breaking of another day, the plan
make my walkin' the dog get away
up on locust point the joint that
inspired "O Say Can"t Ya See"
out there I will reflect on the way
we all connect in this word jam that
is beyond compare.....thank you judih
thank you anemone and deb and -D
and even my own lil offspring down in
virginia skipperbear took the chance to
dare...so I'll head up to Ft. McHenry with
Zaar dog once again ...look out on the
harbor reflecting on this wonderful jam
time that has been, thank you all who
participated once again...........wired
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