When the 9 Strikes!

Nov 2004
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Post by judih » November 19th, 2004, 12:38 am

brain toasted morning
steel bands on my windows
sunlight enters on the sly
as racket of sparrows
play the fifth branch from tomorrow

if you need a fast falafel
meetcha at 12
where the pita are warm
and the appetites are ominous
dip deep into zchug, tchina and revelry
beer's on the house


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Post by Doreen Peri » November 19th, 2004, 12:55 am

i see the mystery
of a dogs bright face
and a trace of hieroglyphics
undeciphered, backward
trees, sharp instruments,
embodied explanations
in simplistic lines and
i dine on hands shaped
like leaves autumn-fallen,
glorious,
amok with
tinted blue
cheeks,
sky, like a sly
racket playing
gamble games
with me.

i welcome
spring and how
the winter fades
to grey, birds
coming to play
with seeds.

and if i didn't have add,
i'd continue the conceipt
even farther.

further is for distance, i think.
farther is for more possibilities.

i see mysteries
in tinted faces.
i welcome
seasons,

fallen
leaves

and warm pita
bread, trucks still
coming to deliver,
dogs always
there when morning
dares to burn
an X
on your
soles,
the tread,
hotsticky.

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » November 19th, 2004, 12:59 am

Jester speaks in
zig zag buddha tongue,
to neutral sky.
"Behold the many
me's underneath you;
it's a platitude of millions!"

Sky chuckles
at jester's dramatics,
enchanted.
"Behold my smile
in the river mirror once;
you'll never be lost again".

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Post by Doreen Peri » November 19th, 2004, 1:07 am

beneath
the tree,
all roots
connect.

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Post by judih » November 19th, 2004, 2:01 am

beneath the sky
all trees connect

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Post by e_dog » November 19th, 2004, 2:20 am

beneath beneath:
all connections

leading somewhere
now/here

everywhere i
digress
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Post by judih » November 19th, 2004, 2:22 am

beneath the digressions
travels the heart
incognito
enraptured

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Post by WIREMAN » November 19th, 2004, 2:22 am

beneath the structure
even the smallest residue
will suffice.................

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Post by judih » November 19th, 2004, 2:25 am

residue of love breeds love
residue of virus breeds virus
one cell is enough

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Post by e_dog » November 19th, 2004, 2:26 am

you suffice
to entice
or
to retreat

to repeat:
to entice

to entreat
entropy
under
the canopy

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Post by judih » November 19th, 2004, 2:30 am

he not busy
bein born
is busy
dyin
(dylan)

while you're wonderin what to jam
read ch. 1 of dylan's chronicles
thanks to jim furnish
link: (oh man, this is so off topic, it's pure inspiration)
http://www.npr.org/templates/story/stor ... Id=4080202

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Post by Doreen Peri » November 19th, 2004, 2:30 am

there is nothing beneath
beneath nothing beneath
underlying currency,
nothing beneath
below, lowdown
truth, nothing
underneath
roots and silt
and though
guilt might
incite a possible
turn of soil, there is
nothing beneath
below and though
i am so reticent to admit
there is nothing more
toward the suface of
because of it than anything
below it i could ever find.

let's spread the virus.
love is a captivating
disease.

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Post by e_dog » November 19th, 2004, 2:31 am

who came first
the woman or the man?

who was it
tended the apple tree?

who taught the snake
to speak?

who sold them the press
-- never used--

to make hard
cider?

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Post by e_dog » November 19th, 2004, 2:35 am

love a disease?
No.

love is a cure
all.

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Post by e_dog » November 19th, 2004, 2:41 am

to cut-up rimbaud --

i could never throw up
a window

on a drunken morning

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