*applause* i love it!Jenni Mansfield Peal wrote:Jayne was pink with giddy light
And heavy hair with stardust flight
When fog and dust and street converged
All giddy, heavy sin to purge
A moral tale of slimey paint
Louisiana's southern taint
And once she was but now she aint
No shoes, no smile, no squeal, no faint
A memory in pink
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Big Time Poetry Melt Word Jam 02-18-05
- Doreen Peri
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balanced on a thought like metal
bowing out like the tension on a fly rod
suspended on a wire
counterbalanced with an image
supporting a metaphor
spinning from the weight and inertia
a thought like a shining mirror
a pond tucked down in the valley
between verses of evergreen
and wisps of sky now refected
smell the berries and the pinecones
see the nymphs and the rainbow
watch the sky break out in ripples and summer come back as a memory
of peepers and cicada calling
what katy did.
bowing out like the tension on a fly rod
suspended on a wire
counterbalanced with an image
supporting a metaphor
spinning from the weight and inertia
a thought like a shining mirror
a pond tucked down in the valley
between verses of evergreen
and wisps of sky now refected
smell the berries and the pinecones
see the nymphs and the rainbow
watch the sky break out in ripples and summer come back as a memory
of peepers and cicada calling
what katy did.
minfin
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a funny thing happened
while waiting for my words to melt
icicles fell on my brain
splitting hemispheres
disconnecting synapses
overriding manual
my brain chips split
lifetimes dripped on my keyboard
each voice with a separate intent
ancient black holes pulled squatter's rights
obliterating young ovu
and innocent pre-soul priority
funny as i watched
the then and the will be
painting duality
while waiting for my words to melt
icicles fell on my brain
splitting hemispheres
disconnecting synapses
overriding manual
my brain chips split
lifetimes dripped on my keyboard
each voice with a separate intent
ancient black holes pulled squatter's rights
obliterating young ovu
and innocent pre-soul priority
funny as i watched
the then and the will be
painting duality
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its all relative
he busts the next one
with but one finger
as the crows in the distance
laugh with derision
the sun has come up
and he has yet to go down
who is right
if no one admits what "the" fuck
is goin on
with but one finger
as the crows in the distance
laugh with derision
the sun has come up
and he has yet to go down
who is right
if no one admits what "the" fuck
is goin on
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- Location: Oz or somepLace like Kansas
Down the street from the Taj Mahal
Reveille drifts throug the mist
southern pacific horn toots good moring
fried matzos and coffee in my tummy
a sunrise coming in an hour
if i live to see it
but why wouldn't i
another day in the life of a fortunate son
with beauty on the wire
a blossom waits to bloom
Reveille drifts throug the mist
southern pacific horn toots good moring
fried matzos and coffee in my tummy
a sunrise coming in an hour
if i live to see it
but why wouldn't i
another day in the life of a fortunate son
with beauty on the wire
a blossom waits to bloom
eternal golden dawn(he is alone)
it is a new day for most that live upon this
world so wondeful
creations greatest gift
imposibilities made possible
within this cyclic infinity
happenstance made truthful
there is more to each breath took
it is so simple if you will allow yourself
to become blind
the truth is not in the sentences
but that wich lies between the lines
world so wondeful
creations greatest gift
imposibilities made possible
within this cyclic infinity
happenstance made truthful
there is more to each breath took
it is so simple if you will allow yourself
to become blind
the truth is not in the sentences
but that wich lies between the lines
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