#8 1/2! yes, you're here - it's the low-key weekend jam

March 2005
hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » April 16th, 2005, 5:07 pm

Slink on,
wearing only
your sequined
words.
You brought me
rainbow prisms,
for my fur-rowed
brows,
beckoning,
delight,
on these walls
of key low go,
going crazy
on the ceiling
of alone in
key low go,
dancing carelessly
overhead,
my empty,
crumpled bed,
.....what you said......

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Post by Lightning Rod » April 16th, 2005, 5:28 pm

sorry that I haven't been able to drop in

but here's some music for the jam:

Did it yesterday.

http://www.studioeight.tv/musicpost/mylips.mp3
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by Traveller13 » April 16th, 2005, 7:05 pm

ahaha excellent!

is that really you singing lightning rod?
how low-key I am to taste your senses
the jam is delicious
the piano becomes a forest-smelling night
and the flute solo flies above
skin temperature
dive without limits
I love people's voices
butterfly rythm
bet you fly with em
before I put my glass down and sit down on the window
to watch the crazy folk dance and paint
at the sound of sweet madness
[i]~"Open your eyes, and open your eyes again"[/i]

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Post by Lightning Rod » April 16th, 2005, 7:31 pm

Yeah, that's my frog voice
my heroes, Jimmy Durante
Louis Armstrong, Tom Waits
Beefheart, Dylan
you know, singers without a
pretty voice.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by Traveller13 » April 16th, 2005, 7:53 pm

looks like my final contribution to today's low-key
it's transporting how easy it is
oce you're in it
makes me wonder what makes me hesitate to contribute
I put lighning's song to play over and over again
it's stuck in my mind now
repetitive pattern
straight on my lips
or is it rake
my mindpatterns are blurred
I need some sleep
and food
who said poetry was easy lol

as you can see
this person is quite focused on describing his state of inner fatigue
this is a classical case of how-are-we-going-to-say-goodnight
observe how the protagonist skillfully deflects the situation by using a clever self-describing tactic

no more. I'm zonked. may this thread go
Image.
[i]~"Open your eyes, and open your eyes again"[/i]

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Post by judih » April 16th, 2005, 11:44 pm

is that an alpha wave or a beta
is that seduction or stimulation
is that a black hole or a starburst

how high is the lowest celestial
how many questions hit the brain
flooring the awareness

how beautiful is the universe
how wide our perception
in this open low - i'm ripe for discovery

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Post by judih » April 17th, 2005, 12:03 am

ah, a sweet end to a beautiful jam
thank you l-rod for the interweaving piano flute and vocals
the words a smooth high wrapped in low

it's been a time, people
thank you for joining this low-key jam

see you next weekend for Image-ination
but meanwhile,

life is so rambunctious
let's appreciate the high notes
stay cool, stay mellow, stay low-key

judih

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