This is my thankful feedback for a place where I learn about myself by learning about what other is, who others are, what I am truly and truly what I'm not. This is my thankful feedback for teachers and freinds whose lessons I have never sat in upon and whose three-dimensionsal lives are as mysterious to me as any faith. This is my thankful feedback for creative space and honesty, for critique and ingnorance, for narcissism and introspection. Thank you.
I had a plan to rule the world with words
on pages, virtual bouquets found full
as codices of holy verse— I failed.
I failed to be diverse, expansive, free
and limitless because I, in the end,
was still a human voice and inky page
and when I longed to touch, I was away
from you— hard touch my verse could not convey
and, bitter as I wept, I’d not assuage
that bitterness. At most can I pretend
to be almighty in my art, to be
a sculptor or a lover’s gasp impaled
on wordy pages two-dimensional—
yet what a death, impaled on lovely swords.
my feedback in April
my feedback in April
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
lovely swords
is it odd or strange
incumbent upon
that words ensconced in swords
do jab
thusly
prod me
is it odd or strange
incumbent upon
that words ensconced in swords
do jab
thusly
prod me
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse
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Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse
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