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Posted: April 10th, 2011, 12:40 pm
by Artguy
on_the_road4.jpg
To a world around the bend
Only mind, thought and wind
Sweet grass broken
Where old men and poets die
Passing under and over
Spiraling concrete wings
The crow defies the round and round
Fly in early morning rising
Yellow blue and mist ahead
Not a tree in site no place to nest
Empires at the other end
Bald earth cries concrete tears
Four wheeled terror
Speed speed speed
Rest

Re: Pages 20 & 21

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 11:59 pm
by judih
The haiku feel of the last lines have stayed with me all night since reading:
Bald earth cries concrete tears
Four wheeled terror
Speed speed speed
Rest

Re: Pages 20 & 21

Posted: April 12th, 2011, 4:41 am
by dadio
Good combination of words and image.

Re: Pages 20 & 21

Posted: April 12th, 2011, 12:04 pm
by Artguy
Hope it didn't keep you up Judih....Thanks dadio

Re: Pages 20 & 21

Posted: April 12th, 2011, 3:30 pm
by judih
Artguy wrote:Hope it didn't keep you up Judih....Thanks dadio
no - but my dreams were speedy