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like a bubble
Posted: June 30th, 2008, 1:54 pm
by SmileGRL
some days i try too hard
& i disappear into my fear
bursting like a bubble
with nowhere to go but in
and sometimes 'in' refuses
to come out
because my pen won't write
what i want it to
and i don't even use big words
so some people will never read
these words
because they aren't twisted enough
but i don't always want to play games
so i run to you
and now i'm crying on your e-mail
about things i've never said before
about what if's and
i miss you so much
& what is this pen writing?
because i'm pretty sure i never said this
mj, 2008
Posted: June 30th, 2008, 8:16 pm
by westcoast
honest is pure art
~hugs~
westie
Posted: June 30th, 2008, 10:00 pm
by mtmynd
mj, you've struck the chord of sympatico in me.
i'm in agreement with Janet... very honest writing + a heartfelt picture.
Posted: July 3rd, 2008, 2:01 pm
by SmileGRL
janet & cecil...thank you kindly, both of you.
Posted: July 20th, 2008, 12:31 pm
by goldenmyst
SmileGRL, your art speaks volumes. I loved the pic and poem. They worked together wonderfully.
John
Posted: July 20th, 2008, 8:26 pm
by Arcadia
bubble
&
unfinished damero
powerful image & words smilegrl!!!!
Posted: July 24th, 2008, 4:07 pm
by SmileGRL
oops i almost missed these. thanks both