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On Eternity's Trail (New! With Song)

Posted: December 31st, 2009, 1:45 pm
by Lightning Rod
You've read the poem, now listen to the song!
Temporary Texas

On The Trail of Eternity

I called my estate Temporary, Texas
barbed wire was illegal there
but the place was protected by barbed wire
and paradox, ephemeral shadow of the dove

I wasn't afraid to invest in the temporary
to love, to love knowing
knowing all the while that the object of my love
the person, place or nation
the ideal or creed or livelihood,
all sentiment, sensation
would vanish, be stolen by time

a tent was temple to my religion
time and rent the devils of my panoply
the mantra, chant, the litany: "It Comes and Goes.
It Comes and Goes. Rama Jah Ohm"

God watches his body decay like an echo
if anything is eternal, infinite
it is God's threshold of pain
mountains crumble, oceans drain
the universe a sore against the grain
time before and time again
It Comes and Goes, It Comes and Goes. Rama Jah Ohm

Meanwhile back in Temporary, Texas
the sheriff sucks the smoke from the barrel of his gun
time is the outlaw, no jail can hold him.
He nails a poster to a tree
it says, "WANTED--ETERNITY."

It Comes and Goes, It Comes and Goes. Rama Jah Ohm

Posted: December 31st, 2009, 5:10 pm
by mtmynd
God watches his body decay like an echo
if anything is eternal, infinite
it is God's threshold of pain


these lines moved me into
tantric tantrums of thought,
where an echo is the only way out.

good pome, especially coming from Temporary.

Posted: January 1st, 2010, 6:40 pm
by creativesoul
So colorful are the parts of your people you write about. It always feels like I went somewhere. Other lives? Who knows, but good stuff!

Posted: January 1st, 2010, 7:11 pm
by mnaz
true. all is stolen by time.

Posted: January 12th, 2010, 6:45 am
by Lightning Rod
Barry Gremillion got inspired by this poem and turned it into a song. Sounds like this:

Temporary Texas

Posted: January 12th, 2010, 7:52 am
by creativesoul
Poems and songs are like hands that reach for each other in a dark theater
popcorn, and a vision dancing before my eyes

Posted: January 25th, 2010, 2:52 pm
by Lightning Rod
thanks for listening, CS

yes, you put it aptly:
'hands that reach for each other in a dark theater'

Posted: January 25th, 2010, 3:04 pm
by stilltrucking
I likes it more every time I have re-reads it.

This bit here was the crux of it for me.
time is the outlaw, no jail can hold him.
He nails a poster to a tree
it says, "WANTED--ETERNITY."

It Comes and Goes, It Comes and Goes. Rama Jah Ohm
Reminded me of this bit.

"I regain space. Time is useless without space."—Mnaz

Perspective

Posted: January 25th, 2010, 9:56 pm
by creativesoul
Seems like I am looking through a window
one world complimenting another
light dancing in the future

Posted: January 26th, 2010, 9:30 am
by stilltrucking
I want to listen to it but something screwed up on my computer won't let me.

dam