and another thing

[constantine]

was going to write a story
but i thought i'd do a poem instead
for me, poems are easier
i stack up the lines like pancakes
eat them from top to bottom
or flip them over and shuffle
doesn't matter
as far as punctuation goes
i throw it the fuck out
i like the ambiguous effect produced
by throwing it the fuck out
and another thing
this capitalization crap
like look at me man
I'm Upper Case
I'm taking over this line
fucking fascist
i don't know what the big deal is
these lines of demarcation
this quality control
when i write a poem i want to stretch out and relax
i don't want anybody telling me what to do
that's why i got mixed up in this poetry shit to begin with

[judih]

ha! Capitalist Pig!
Taking Over!
not fer long

constantine - dictator meets match and all chill out - fabulous.
oh and i love the stack of pancakes image.

[mtmynd]

no waffling there
stack 'em high
and say it long

[still.trucking]

My name is Aristotle
And I likes poetic pancakes

[SmileGRL]

to each his own...

sometimes i like to play with capitals (because i can). and sometimes i write a poem-in-a-paragraph...because i can and sometimes i say eye when i mean i and vice versa.

whatever floats your boat...juSt wRite.

[constantine]

everybody has their own way, and even though my way is the best i would never suggest to anyone to adopt my way even though my way is the best!

[SmileGRL]

haha. so fuNny mr. diNo