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rider

Posted: March 21st, 2008, 8:53 pm
by constantine
yellow touches the blue horse
green grass, moist to savor
buck and gallop, run
the northern steppe
to the valley of shards and prisms
no iron bites -
no taste of leather,
yellow touches the blue horse
blue horse without a rider

Posted: March 21st, 2008, 10:05 pm
by westcoast
i love it :) it's a joy to read and to speak out loud.

~westcoast

Posted: March 22nd, 2008, 10:24 am
by Arcadia
first the sounds
then the colors
then the savor

(chronology of my reception :wink: !)

great poem!!!!!! :)

Posted: March 22nd, 2008, 10:35 am
by constantine
thank you arcadia and westie.