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let's do lunch
Posted: May 1st, 2008, 8:27 pm
by constantine
as she spoke to me for the last time
all i could think was get on with it
you've taken enough of my time already
thanks for packing my stuff so neatly
bless you for your swift consideration
my only regret is...
gee whiz
somebody help me with this one!
Posted: May 2nd, 2008, 11:09 pm
by westcoast
these kinds of departures can't be rehearsed. nice write C.
~westie
Posted: May 2nd, 2008, 11:21 pm
by constantine
ahh westie, you look simply marvelous tonight. nice pic. thanks for saving my lonely poem from cyberoblivion. i post things on arcanum and they trickle down the page like lonely teardrops. the philistines!!
Posted: May 2nd, 2008, 11:28 pm
by westcoast
thank you, my dear
lol!!
AC waxes and wanes as all site do. it's a challenge for the prolific writer to receive continuous feedback. don't let it affect your creative stride.
~westie
Posted: May 2nd, 2008, 11:39 pm
by constantine
that is so true - of all sites. i have a bit of the paranoiac in me and sometimes take it as rejection. even if it was, i would still keep cranking - we are poets, it is what we do - regardless of whether it's read or appreciated.
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 1:18 am
by westcoast
yep
