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Posted: August 6th, 2008, 11:06 pm
by constantine
leather is my destiny
hog tie on general principle
i've done my duty
made the world a little safer
better living through discipline
now

Posted: August 6th, 2008, 11:10 pm
by Doreen Peri
Scary.

Bigtime scary.

YIKES!

I'm outa here!

Posted: August 6th, 2008, 11:13 pm
by constantine
sissy

Posted: August 6th, 2008, 11:15 pm
by Doreen Peri
Creepy. Weird.

Sissy me? Fine!

You got it!

Cya.

Posted: August 6th, 2008, 11:38 pm
by constantine
that is one interpretation of the poem. a political slant - metaphor of imperialism, fascistic tendencies could be another, animal abuse - one more. i play around, but basically i have serious motives in my poetry.

Posted: August 7th, 2008, 12:48 am
by stilltrucking
whack whack whack
not my cup of tea
but different strokes
they say

Posted: August 7th, 2008, 7:24 am
by saw
thank god, somebody is fighting those god-dammed terrorists....
helps me sleep at night......open to many interpretations.....the sign
of a good poem.....peace out

Posted: August 7th, 2008, 7:59 am
by judih
fast portrait - an open book
looks like you penned this a la toulouse-lautrec
urban cafe patron

Posted: August 7th, 2008, 9:28 am
by Doreen Peri
This is how I interpreted it.... ;) Seemed a description of a rapist situation.... a man dominating a woman, tying her up and beating her with leather.

Was just playing around with the "yikes" and "cya" stuff to illustrate that the poem was effective.

I can see how it could be interpreted in several different ways.

Posted: August 7th, 2008, 10:26 am
by constantine
well, i tell you doreen -my first take on it was sexual dominance - then political dominance - then across the board dominance. the rational mind has to catch up with the subconscious sometimes - almost all the time. it's a swirling nebula - creativity, and personality.

Posted: August 7th, 2008, 10:29 am
by Doreen Peri
Exactly.

Plus, you're not required to know what it means or to explain what you wanted it to mean. You're the poet.

It's up to the reader to interpret it. :)

Interpretations can be as many as the number of readers who read the poem.

That's my take on it.

Posted: August 7th, 2008, 11:05 am
by constantine
true. the nice thing about the forum is it provides the reader and the author an immediate connection - you don't get that in print - it's largely anonymous. usually i don't interpret for the reader, but i enjoy giving my take on it at times. considering the nature of the piece - the overt nature - i thought i'd steer a little bit.