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hollywood

Posted: January 14th, 2009, 11:09 pm
by constantine
my women of the silver screen
don't know what it is, but
i love them so
i really do
not just the stars, but
the extras and walk ons
the incidentals
they drive me nuts
they really do
i try to figure them out
what brought them to that particular point
you know - their story
story within a story within a story
i try to catch them in revealing moments
when they break the illusion
when they're out of character
it happens you know
it really does
if you look hard enough
you can see through anything
and time loses itself within the focus
and they could be sitting right next to you
for all that it would matter
no difference, same deal
for all i know they may be looking at me

Posted: January 15th, 2009, 12:11 am
by Lightning Rod
great theme dino

the screen definitely has two sides

here is a song I wrote on the same theme

http://studioeight.tv/musicpost/LR/garbowanda.mp3

Where did Garbo Go?

Posted: January 15th, 2009, 12:12 am
by mtmynd
the last line... that one last line...
those ten words... the final, fin...
a good conclusion... cinematic

Posted: January 15th, 2009, 12:14 am
by hester_prynne
Blind ambition maybe.
Big money, possibly.
An innate drive to entertain, hopefully.
Indeed, good stories brewing now.
Off of good writing.
Dig it.
H

Posted: January 17th, 2009, 8:55 pm
by constantine
thanks guys!

Posted: January 17th, 2009, 9:38 pm
by mtmynd
no, no, no... thank YOU. ;)