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man with xray booper eyes

Posted: March 21st, 2009, 8:57 am
by constantine
he may look like a plutocrat
or maybe even a socialist
man with the xray booper eyes

he may be discussing tolstoi or chekhov
elaborating on hegel and kant
endless propositions, verbose postulations
incessant and perpetual dictation
when in all actuality
man with xray booper eyes

it happened in the early days
sweet breasts beneath warm sweater
carrying me off to bed
long hair, perfume, glasses
i love glasses!
little child with big dreams
big fleshy warm ass dreams
thus was he born and shall ever remain
the man with xray booper eyes

Posted: March 21st, 2009, 7:35 pm
by Yejun
I liked this. To be honest, I stumbled over some of the wording but overall I found it a satisfying read.

Posted: March 22nd, 2009, 1:40 pm
by Arcadia
mmm... what´s booper?

Posted: March 22nd, 2009, 3:09 pm
by constantine
could be female breasts, or the butt - any female body part a man might fixate upon.

Posted: March 23rd, 2009, 12:17 am
by Nazz
I think they installed x-ray eye machines at some airports, like Salt Lake for example, but of course that has little to do with your verse, which is curvacious.

Posted: March 23rd, 2009, 9:47 pm
by constantine
i like to think it's a feminist poem.

Posted: March 23rd, 2009, 9:57 pm
by mtmynd
i like to think it's a feminist poem.
Really.

Posted: March 23rd, 2009, 9:59 pm
by constantine
yes. i think it lays out the male psyche rather honestly. a woman should have written it. what's wrong with them anyway?!

Posted: March 23rd, 2009, 10:10 pm
by mtmynd
Indeed... and laid out very nicely.

Posted: March 23rd, 2009, 10:12 pm
by constantine
thank you. now we are even better friends!

Posted: March 23rd, 2009, 10:37 pm
by mtmynd
:wink: