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and another thing

Posted: June 24th, 2009, 8:40 pm
by constantine
was going to write a story
but i thought i'd do a poem instead
for me, poems are easier
i stack up the lines like pancakes
eat them from top to bottom
or flip them over and shuffle
doesn't matter
as far as punctuation goes
i throw it the fuck out
i like the ambiguous effect produced
by throwing it the fuck out
and another thing
this capitalization crap
like look at me man
I'm Upper Case
I'm taking over this line
fucking fascist
i don't know what the big deal is
these lines of demarcation
this quality control
when i write a poem i want to stretch out and relax
i don't want anybody telling me what to do
that's why i got mixed up in this poetry shit to begin with

Posted: June 24th, 2009, 10:00 pm
by judih
ha! Capitalist Pig!
Taking Over!
not fer long

constantine - dictator meets match and all chill out - fabulous.
oh and i love the stack of pancakes image.

Posted: June 25th, 2009, 8:19 am
by mtmynd
no waffling there
stack 'em high
and say it long

Posted: June 25th, 2009, 10:10 am
by still.trucking
My name is Aristotle
And I likes poetic pancakes

Posted: June 25th, 2009, 4:01 pm
by SmileGRL
to each his own...

sometimes i like to play with capitals (because i can). and sometimes i write a poem-in-a-paragraph...because i can :P and sometimes i say eye when i mean i and vice versa.

whatever floats your boat...juSt wRite.

Posted: June 26th, 2009, 4:24 pm
by constantine
everybody has their own way, and even though my way is the best i would never suggest to anyone to adopt my way even though my way is the best!

Posted: June 29th, 2009, 2:47 pm
by SmileGRL
haha. so fuNny mr. diNo :mrgreen: