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the mess

Posted: October 27th, 2009, 9:19 pm
by constantine
wasting my time with this stuff
giving order to anything but
i should scream this shit
or whisper it to myself
when nobody's looking
even if they are
who cares
can't undo things
i monkey around with the past
like i can figure it out
but i can't figure out anything
i can't do fuck

Posted: October 28th, 2009, 3:18 am
by stilltrucking
A waste of time well worth the effort.

Thanks

Posted: October 28th, 2009, 6:07 am
by saw
if only we had a time machine, and could travel back to be a fly on the wall of our youth maybe we would come to feel some peace in our hearts and heads from the decisions we made, but I suspect we didn't have all the freedom society would like to believe we did, we may just learn that the whole thing has been scripted from the start.

I hear your frustration dino, and I've been down that same road a time or two myself..........good poem

Posted: October 28th, 2009, 8:32 am
by Doreen Peri
Fuck the past. It's over and done with. Move on, brotha, move on!

You're right, you're wasting your time with it.

"who cares
can't undo things"

Exactly.

Well said! ;)

If you're going to waste your time with dealing with any other time than the present, try the future. It's much more productive.

*smile*

(enjoyed your poem)

Posted: October 28th, 2009, 4:20 pm
by Nazz
Me too.
can't do fuck
about anything.
just ride it out
keep going..

Posted: October 28th, 2009, 4:24 pm
by mtmynd
i can't do fuck

debatable... you can write what you feel. that's something.

Posted: October 28th, 2009, 4:34 pm
by Perdida
can't change the past, worrying about a past mess only brings that mess into the present.

let it go, and live for today.

hugs for you Dino :D