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Honoring Constantine Pantazonis - RIP 6/16/14
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constantine
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alternate universe

Post by constantine » December 22nd, 2010, 8:07 pm

i go nuts in this place
and it helps talking to you
i feel so alone
i sit at the computer
i check out the sites
as if
i was visiting with friends
family, or petting a cat
i saw a neat cat online
once i saw a kiwi
and it changed my life
in some minuscule sense
i felt i could understand
what it goes through, searching
the forest floor, a grub here
an insect that tastes buttery
squabbles and squawks
social life, i crave that
sometimes, i miss it so bad
that i resort to poetry
i'm talking to you now
from an alternate universe
a galaxy of kiwi birds and squirrels
good people, i love them so
but i can't make them understand
i can't make them accept me
as one of their own kind

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Re: alternate universe

Post by hester_prynne » December 22nd, 2010, 10:23 pm

You made my day with this....love it!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Re: alternate universe

Post by judih » December 23rd, 2010, 12:27 am

somewhere,
squirrels and kiwis wink in knowing brotherhood

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Re: alternate universe

Post by dadio » December 23rd, 2010, 9:58 am

Classic poem. 8)

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Re: alternate universe

Post by joel » December 23rd, 2010, 2:29 pm

For me, they're gars and goldfish and goldfinches...and they don't get it either, that I'm a person too. But I stay with them...and now and then a few respond with something seemingly personable too.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: alternate universe

Post by WIREMAN » December 24th, 2010, 9:41 am

the essence of what it's all about in this cyber game of words....u b poet supreme dino.....someday we'll do a show again......merry merry to u!!!!!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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