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love it to death

Posted: January 11th, 2011, 5:54 pm
by constantine
i love it all
i love it to death
every word
with every breath
the metaphor
the simile
even
the skill-
fully placed
apostrophe
so sublime
all the time
goodness gracious
it even rhymes!

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 11th, 2011, 10:55 pm
by justwalt
Smiles happen...

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 11th, 2011, 11:06 pm
by Doreen Peri
i love it, too,
the way you do
the dance of verse
i've read MUCh worse... (;))
you are a poe tree king
or earl, i like the way
you twirl your pen
with metaphor and simile.
one is a tree
and one is like a tree.
how simple can that be?

teehee

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 11th, 2011, 11:44 pm
by judih
finally,
the apostrophe
receives its due

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 12th, 2011, 3:11 am
by mnaz
toss
off

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 12th, 2011, 8:51 am
by constantine
it's the crux of the biscuit. i broke up skillfully so i could turn it into a sonnet!

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 12th, 2011, 11:14 am
by saw
the bard has got nothing on you......that's Joe Bard, my plumber...matter of fact he a lousy poet......how goes it dino ?......I hear Cincinnati has not been the same since your arrival......I like it.....no...love it.....

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 14th, 2011, 8:06 am
by constantine
i have altered the destiny of cincinnati merely by being there - it's a well- known fact. and, if i may be so bold - is poet an accurate term to describe what i am? sort of diminishes my accomplishments and capabilities. i prefer something more along the lines of: maestro of the word symphonic, or el literato - yes! that's it - el literato.

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 14th, 2011, 9:24 am
by justwalt
poemist, works too

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 14th, 2011, 10:01 am
by saw
does el literato wear a mask ?.....a cape ?........does he carry a rapier, sharper than a honed tongue ?.....vice versa ?.....curious..........

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 14th, 2011, 10:38 am
by constantine
he carries an orb.

Re: love it to death

Posted: January 14th, 2011, 11:12 am
by joel
el literato, orb in hand,
pen in the other--scepter of the realm of the New Word Order,
whose subjects tickle the ivories of keyboard touchscreen rhapsodies.