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drowning in cotton

Posted: July 26th, 2011, 9:59 am
by constantine
drowning in cotton
the sugar-coated quicksand
this poem is very popular
with lonely women who love poetry
and lonely men who love lonely women who love poetry
on the other site they simply adore it
it reminds them of something
it has cool images and word-play
it has social, maybe even political implications
an ending that provides all that an ending should possess
it's the feel-good poem of the summer season
and if history is any indication
tomorrow's poem will be even better

Re: drowning in cotton

Posted: July 27th, 2011, 1:11 pm
by saw
eternal optimism lingers .....a summer blockbuster like this will be difficult to top.....but I have faith in you dino......

Re: drowning in cotton

Posted: July 27th, 2011, 3:38 pm
by dadio
yes, we hope for the next poem to be better, but this one's fine.

Re: drowning in cotton

Posted: July 27th, 2011, 6:36 pm
by Arcadia
oh..., those delic-ate summer shades, loved the poem dino! :wink:

Re: drowning in cotton

Posted: July 28th, 2011, 9:10 am
by the mingo
8)

Re: drowning in cotton

Posted: July 30th, 2011, 9:14 am
by constantine
thank you, compadres!