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men at play

Posted: May 1st, 2012, 10:36 am
by constantine
going to hit the alleys
duckpins of the working-class,
the antithesis of the horsey set
with their bridle paths
and tally-ho bullshit,
hurling that ball - a comet
from the right hand of god
smashing the pins like the athenians
at marathon, crushing the persian line
it's a treasure trove of sensory input
and the people are funny too!
with their shirts and hand-towels
the accoutrements of aficianados
as they vent the anger of a lifetime,
of swing shifts and red-faced foremen
trotting on the treadmill
and never quite getting there,
if only the pins had faces
if only the horses could speak

Re: men at play

Posted: May 1st, 2012, 11:11 am
by creativesoul
aloha-welcome back- nice mood in this one... go for it--- :lol:

Re: men at play

Posted: May 1st, 2012, 11:54 am
by the mingo
WHAM !

Re: men at play

Posted: May 2nd, 2012, 10:21 am
by constantine
thank you, creativesoul and mr. mingo. i just got back from mongolia and was itching to write something.

Re: men at play

Posted: May 2nd, 2012, 10:38 am
by the mingo
Mongolia will do that to ya 8)