confessional poem # 2

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constantine
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confessional poem # 2

Post by constantine » March 3rd, 2013, 5:09 pm

in my last poem
confessional poem # 1
i didn't really confess much of anything
i talked about women and how shy
and completely ineffectual
i can be sometimes, then
i made a big deal about their
"intuitive powers" and then
i sort of flexed my mythological muscle
with an impressive, but somewhat extraneous
reference about the oracle at dodona
and the peculiar habits of the priestesses
going barefoot and never cleaning their feet
so as to always be in touch with the sacred mom-mom
i believe that was how i phrased it
so, as you can see, if there was anything confessional
it was purely subliminal, perhaps
my idiosyncrasies will pop out anyway
like a schoolboy erection that always seemed to happen
when the teacher would call you to the front of the class
or when riding on the bus sitting next to an old lady
it's there, it's not going anywhere
whether i confess it or not

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Re: confessional poem # 2

Post by dadio » March 4th, 2013, 3:06 am

I really like this poem. Good images conjured up.

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Re: confessional poem # 2

Post by saw » March 5th, 2013, 11:47 am

great ending, and a smooth ride to get there, along the currents of acceptance.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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