Slides in quickly turning down the lights in a fiery last whisper on an ice cold evening
why don't I use commas they all as
I do not think with commas I suppose Iam sorry it is so hard to read
what I write but then its the thinking gets in the way
I did not relies people think about it while they read
I do not think much about it when I write , I listen
hum , what does a comma sound like, a pause, oh
I dont paus much ......chuckle
Sundown
Re: Sundown
I do not think with commas
It´s up to you!
It´s up to you!
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Re: Sundown
This is for fun I am attention differnt , ill be care full with the serious work I want youall to know the old man in his comphort and to say who i am as essance the concept of grapes before wine as an introduction . I will spell check and peirod and camma question mark soon as to seamlessly blend in with the dimension . but I say hello should be in the intro but this is the moment so howdy
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